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June 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
I've lurked this story long enough. I gotta come out and tell you how much I love it! I've read it at lease 20 times, and I love it just as much every time!
It really is a brilliant story, everything about it. It builds upon a great obvious shipping. You capture Ephraim's lust and Eirika's beauty very accurately. I have also read Eirika's Virtue which was equally well done.
I would strongly encourage you to write more of these two! You do a very good job.
I've lurked this story long enough. I gotta come out and tell you how much I love it! I've read it at lease 20 times, and I love it just as much every time!
It really is a brilliant story, everything about it. It builds upon a great obvious shipping. You capture Ephraim's lust and Eirika's beauty very accurately. I have also read Eirika's Virtue which was equally well done.
I would strongly encourage you to write more of these two! You do a very good job.
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July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Karl, thanks, but currently I have no plans to update the story on AFF. Check my Twitter for updates on my stories, for the eventual continuation.
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July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
All your stories are excellent examples of writing, but this is a particular favorite of mine, since incest fics are among the niches I look for and Ephraim and Eirika are so very incest-able.
I do hope, though, that you'll be updating on this site, as well?
I do hope, though, that you'll be updating on this site, as well?
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July 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Heh, that's so tempting! I'm eagerly awaiting the new chapter, even more so with the revelation we now get, heheh
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July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yo
nice, keep on writing
nice, keep on writing
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June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm dissappointed in chapter five. The length for the chapter is inconsistant with the others, and there, I feel like it makes this lack intensity and depth. You should've waited and added the next chapter to this one.
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June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Feel free to read the full version at http://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/1575813?rfrid=streti
This version will not be published on AFF for now.
This version will not be published on AFF for now.
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June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You know where I stand on this, but with any luck, the chapter will inspire people to REVIEW for once, instead of just hiding!
Anyway, I hope we get the happy ending the two deserve!
Anyway, I hope we get the happy ending the two deserve!
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May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really, really like this one. His overwhelming lust is palpable throughout, and very, very hot. His descent into depravity is very exciting. I always love your stuff, but this is quickly becoming a favorite!
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May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
And here is the missing Chapter 4! As I mentioned in my earlier review of this chapter, I loved seeing just how bad Ephraim is slipping into depravity. I'm thinking maybe two more chapters until the deed is fully done?