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December 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yes, yes you are. cute but psycho. you manage to end each chapter on the most interesting of cliffhangers. you have short but highly readable chapters, and all of the spelling / grammar issues (of which there are few) are those that can easily be missed by betas and most readers. (the only one that i found that was noticeable was a dropped r in one of the early chapters). all in all an enticing read and i am eager for more.
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June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg! i sooo love thi story! i also love how you didnt use an outdated pairing. They rly r so cute together and i think its possible that it could happen. I found it to b very realistic, i mean, after all anything is possible right?
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May 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that Stockholm-syndrome...and all the fun you can have with it. :)
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May 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy this story. The relationship is not too unrealistic. Sora grew up in an abusive, unloving home and when he is suddenly taken in by someone who treats him like a treasure (ignoring the bondage, etc.) it is likely that he would start to have feelings for his captor.
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May 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes another brilliant chapter! I am really enjoying this fic and look forward to your updates. Keep up the brilliant work!
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May 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
More more more! Who wants sora and why?! Please update soon!
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April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a pretty good story, i like it. Uh... i'm not sure if you know this, if it's supposed to be like this or not, but you got it to where other people can add chapters too. So yeah, just making sure you know.
Peace out \/
Peace out \/
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April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awwwww hurry leon!!!!!!!!!!! more please!!!!
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April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well if Leon steals him away, it might be for the better! Jesus, you're cruel to poor Sora! *laughs* I almost teared up when Seifer struck him! My goodness how much more angst can this story get? Leon better snatch him away before Seifer hires Vincent to kill his only nephew!
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March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow this is really sad!!!!!!! this is an interesting plot. update soon!!! and whos zell? i havent played any of the old final fantasys.