rate_review Reviews

wow this is so good!! I got a feel for Kira straight away and I have a Draeni hunter that looks exactly like her too hahaha. I haven't played her in donkeys ages though I'm tempted to give her a run after reading about your girl lol. Yay for hot orcs doing a wall of muscle impersonation, whoo hoo! Anything with orcs is a winner as far as I'm concerned, especially if they are the quiet, cruisy powerful that your orc is. I loved the spar with Horace, but the only thing about that was that it was a little bit confusing. At first I thought she was sparring with the dwarf, I had to re-read it a few times to figure it out. Regardless, it was a great read and I'm hanging for the next installment! :D

Orc me up baby lol!

Aaaaah, continue continue!

Very nicely written. I saw no errors in spelling nor grammar, and characterization was well done. Detailed enough to keep my attention, and ended at just the right spot to keep me curious for more.
I await the next installment. ^_^