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December 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was none too bad! I thought buttsecks right away when I saw that guy too... I srsly felt bad when I had to kill him, but it's not like he would buttsecks me in the first place : / you should write another one with some fo rizzle buttsexing! Vicente should prolly be on top, I dare say. But yeah, nicely written!
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March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Van i have More...Pwease?
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January 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can't say anything other than what Adele and Fawnheart have said in their reviews for this story, I totally agree with them.
This........ was......... great !!!!!! =D
This........ was......... great !!!!!! =D
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March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow...
This is so good! So rich with detail and you made their thoughts, motivations etc really clear...I"m gushing now haha! But this was brilliant. I hope you write more about these two, I have the story bookmarked so I can check back. I loved this. HOt and with enough character development to make me care about them but without weighing the story down. I really liked that Trevyn wasn't a wimp too, but a mean as hell and damn good assassin. And Vincente was like this old world...I dunno..? Yeah, just brilliant and well paced.
This is so good! So rich with detail and you made their thoughts, motivations etc really clear...I"m gushing now haha! But this was brilliant. I hope you write more about these two, I have the story bookmarked so I can check back. I loved this. HOt and with enough character development to make me care about them but without weighing the story down. I really liked that Trevyn wasn't a wimp too, but a mean as hell and damn good assassin. And Vincente was like this old world...I dunno..? Yeah, just brilliant and well paced.