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for Wesker's Chosen

by maiafay376

person Tia
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Looks cool sofar, cant wait to see more
schedule March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm excited to see you doing another Resident Evil story. I really enjoy the passion you put into writing and agree very strongly with your page too. It's nice to be ble to enjoy the characters you love in alternate stories in which they have been done justice. I beat Resident Evil 5 a while back and was left wanting more.
person Adam
schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well done. I enjoyed this quite a bit, particularly the way you removed Sheva and Chris from the story. Keep up the good work.
person Miss Morbid
schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was almost frighteningly good. I could see, hear, and smell everything Chris was, and the images of Wesker standing there like a fallen angel with the fire and smoke around him made the scene all the more intense. I have played Resident Evil 5 and Wesker is by far my favorite character; he has so much depth it's mind-boggling how complex of a character he is for being in a video game. Chris's death made me kind of upset since he was such a likeable character and a good-hearted guy, I don't think he deserved that painful death but nevertheless you wrote it beautifully with near flawless detail. Can't wait to read more from you, this will haunt me for a long time. I'm planning on writing my own story about RE5 and I might or might now post it on this site...we'll see.

MM
person Naughtykitty
schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
o_o Wow that was the best RE story I have ever read! Wesker was such a bad ass in the game and I thought he deserved a way better death, but dang you really made him look evil in this story lol. Poor Sheva and Chris :( I feel bad that they died and I don't think Chris deserved such a painful fate. Nevertheless you're one hell of a writer and I'm excited to see an update ^_^ oh, and this made sound incredibly stupid but I'm new to this site and I have no idea how to post my stories lol. Anyways lookin' forward to more excellent work.

<3 NK
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, so interested...I wasn't planning to read when I say Leon/Ashley, but the thoughts of how Wesker managed it made me click, and now, I'm attached. I have to finish, especially since this is so well written. I await your update~
-Kuro
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Intense!

I've never been that big a fan of Resident Evil, but my friend (who is) just beat it today, and I just had to see what you've decided to to differently.

That said, I really liked the prologue! It was very nicely written, and I enjoyed reading it. I'll definitely be coming back to read more of this sure to be awesome tale. =]
person N
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
new story!!!!!!!!!!
T T,love you!
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
After all this time, I still have a hard time reading your stories. To be so eloquently and vividly cruel to prized characters is nothing short of evil and twisted.

But you do it really well.

You know how your AU stories torment me, but I wanted to take the time to say nicely done so far. I really felt myself inside Chris's head, and I particularly liked his scattered but obsessed thought patterns. The way he compared himself to Wesker was nice to read, and I felt a harsh truth to those words. Near the end of this tragic and diabolical chapter of yours, I actually felt Chris's pain and anger. I also felt a sense of twisted poetic law, watching Wesker prevail once again. The very last bit that took me through Chris's head as he found his 'special place' was nice, if not all the more sad because of the end he was about to meet.

My dear Carrie, it takes a lot of will power and strength to do what you do to the characters we all love. Curse me for saying this, but don't stop. Make no mistake, I have a hard time swallowing what you write. Some might say I really dislike it. But as I said before, you do it very well, and I can't help but read.

Always a pleasure reading your stuff. Keep it up.

-JM

p.s. some strange powers came over me at 2 in the morning last night and I wrote the shit out of a post-RE5 one shot. not erotic, but i feel pretty strongly about it. once it's edited and fine tuned, i'll be sure to let it loose.
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty intense. It's very well written and I'm glad I read it. I hated the game ending, it just didn't feel right to me. =/
I look forward to the next chapter!