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March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was good, I hope there will be a sequel with Nikea and another sexy female going full at it, before another scene with Zerase.
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March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story! The characters and Zerase's handling of the rune orb and the rune itself were very natural and concurrent with the Suikoden world and Suikoden V.
The flow of the story is very good, and the sex scene is great as well, though I was hoping Nikea (or Zerase) wouldn't settle without some further... experimenting. Perhaps later? Though Nikea is now running around the castle with a dick in her pants. That's some handy magic Zerase has on her cloak, I suppose it's there for the rain, usually... instead of other uses like this.
One typo with a comma: "said Zerase. stepping closer", and another: "Someting like that"
One thing that doesn't click are these two sentences: "The bits between her legs had never really mattered that much to her." and "She'd wondered about what it'd be like to have a dick once or twice" unless they have a direct causal connection. Otherwise, the indifference of the first sentence seems to be in contrast with the interest of the second. But I'll take the interpretation of a causal connection between two differing lines of interest.
The flow of the story is very good, and the sex scene is great as well, though I was hoping Nikea (or Zerase) wouldn't settle without some further... experimenting. Perhaps later? Though Nikea is now running around the castle with a dick in her pants. That's some handy magic Zerase has on her cloak, I suppose it's there for the rain, usually... instead of other uses like this.
One typo with a comma: "said Zerase. stepping closer", and another: "Someting like that"
One thing that doesn't click are these two sentences: "The bits between her legs had never really mattered that much to her." and "She'd wondered about what it'd be like to have a dick once or twice" unless they have a direct causal connection. Otherwise, the indifference of the first sentence seems to be in contrast with the interest of the second. But I'll take the interpretation of a causal connection between two differing lines of interest.
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March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and I suppose you're aware that Suikoden Tierkreis for the DS is just about to be released.
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March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
But I'll take the interpretation of a causal connection between two differing lines of interest.
Honestly? I have no idea what you mean with this sentence.
But anyways, the basic idea was that while Nikea doesn't usually have sex on the brain, but that doesn't mean she's completely asexual either. And those few times where she did have sex on the brain she'd... wondered. Call it a kind idle curiosity that only shows up late at night.
And yeah, I know Tierkreis is supposed to come out tomorrow. Problem is, so is Persona 4.
Honestly? I have no idea what you mean with this sentence.
But anyways, the basic idea was that while Nikea doesn't usually have sex on the brain, but that doesn't mean she's completely asexual either. And those few times where she did have sex on the brain she'd... wondered. Call it a kind idle curiosity that only shows up late at night.
And yeah, I know Tierkreis is supposed to come out tomorrow. Problem is, so is Persona 4.
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March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
To put it another way, I took it to mean you hinting that Nikea wasn't really interested in men, but in women instead.
Don't really care about Persona, so I didn't know it wasn't even released in Europe yet.
Don't really care about Persona, so I didn't know it wasn't even released in Europe yet.