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by SevenTreasuresxxx

schedule April 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
need moar, i was too lazy to review the story the first time i read it, and i didnt review your other one. sorry (^^;), but i remembered it and went looking for it to read it again. i love this pairing, i never really like draenei guys, they seemed to buff. i love how you portrayed him as being sensitive about the tentacles tho XD

i would love to see more of these guys, theyre so cute.
schedule April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I found the interaction between these two characters much more fulfilling when they're alone, as opposed to the Tauren Mill story. The sex scene really was insanely hot. I wouldn't mind seeing more of this.
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Heee so cute and romantic <3
person Sothee01
schedule March 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww Now I feel bad because I did not review your other story. I am just to lazy.

I want you to know I did read it and I really liked it!!

This story was also really good and you should totally keep writing more!!!
schedule March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like your style, this story had a nice, smooth/gentle humour about it. I had a smile on my face for just about the whole time, especially at the banter between the two of them. I like the 'tentacle tease' where the Draeni got pissed off about it? Brilliant,I could see it happening in my minds eye o.0 not sure how scary a thing that is but :p Definitely a good read :D I loved it.