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for Fine Lines

by NTonks

schedule April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
An extremely well written story, and the sex scenes were incredibly delicious. I came. Lol, no really, keep writing, and I'm surprised you haven't already been reviewed, this is great!

On a side note, I read this because this was the only Soji/Yosuke story on AFF, and while breathplay isn't usually my thing, I actually loved it how you described it, so you may have just given me a new fetish. That's your sin to bear. XD

Anyways, keep writing, your really talented and you have excellent pacing.

10 STARS OUT OF FIVE!