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April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Don't get me wrong, i love the pairing and i like the idea of making it up through an RP but as it is your writing is a bit all over the place. It would be much better if one of you would go through it and fix it up so that it is told from one point of view and from one time frame. In some of the paragraphs the story was being narrated and in others it was switching between saying something was happening and something did happen. otherwise good luck. =^.^=
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March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please update soon, i wanna see Nero give in to Dante X3
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March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You have to keep going, awww I hope it gets "hot" soon ~_^