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for Vacation Leave

by Eristia

person CatAlin
schedule October 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm not a fan of LukexTear .. but I love the brutal abuse he's giving her right now! I'm curious to see how Mer .. Natalia and Asch fidget around each other later and what else'll happen. Perhaps give me a slight warning before any LukexTear lemon happens, so I can prepare my mind for it.

C-A
person Anon
schedule August 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I love this! I can not wait until it's done so I can read it all!!!
person Yuugao
schedule August 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really love how your story has been going so far, it really has a good mix of plot and romance building and I love how you depicted their world. I do hope you'll find more inspiration to write (Hell I'll draw you pictures if you like) and put up more chapters soon~
person ME
schedule August 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Haven't read this in a while. Please keep updating! I love your fics, especially luke/tear. I really hope to see more Luke/tear from you!
person Jashin
schedule December 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Not as intense as the other chapters but it is still good. Too much intensity can be bad.
person hihanahotaru
schedule October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YES! LUKE TEAR'S COMING TO THE CHORAL CASTLE! <3

The long-awaited tea time... HAS ARRIVED! AND I LOVED IT <33 ilu banshee mommysis. XD;

KEEP ON WRITING, CAN'T WAIT TILL DAY 4 (can't wait, as usual. lulz)
person Vook
schedule June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I really liked this! I've played through about 2/3 of Abyss now, and I love how Meryl came out in your fic. (Well, I prefer to call her Natalia, for who I know her as in the game, in terms of personality.) I love how spunky and resolute she is...but also kind of naïve. I also love her confusion about the whole "sex" topic. (Like she's thinking: I understand it's pleasurable enough, but...what the hell does Asch SEE in this sort of thing that makes him want to think about it all day and all night? I had no idea...)

Keep going! The only thing I don't particularly like, actually, is that it's a bit hard to read because your spacing is kind of big.
person Loz
schedule June 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wah!!♥ What steamy and awesome chappie!! Natalia fights back!! Please release the 3rd chapter soon!!
person Jashin
schedule May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great to see my fave author back in action... Great fic... Can't wait for the continuation... Keep it up... :D
person LaZy
schedule May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I LOOOOOOOVE IT!! OMG THIS IS WAAAAR~ SMUT WAAR!! I LOVE IT!! Great, now you'll make me bug you for another update XDDD. Anyway, I really can't wait for the next chapter. This chapter was a total leap from chapter 1. Chapter one is just candy compared to this chapter! keep writing, We'll be here to support you! <3