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for Elements of Chaos

by xxUchihacest

schedule February 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor tortured Chris. I do love the element of playfulness in Wesker and I do like the fact that despite him being in love with his captain he can still backmouth him.
person illreris
schedule October 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dear writer, I'm glad I found this story here XD I was addicted on your works :P [This one and "Bribery and the God Complex",the comment is on FanFiction though] I like the A/N that explain this love as a teenage crush, I'm sure we will see Chris grown up emotional. (~_~) When Chris stood up for Jill both against Wesker mocking words and Tyrant, it's perfect to describe his personality, sacrificed type indeed. Cos he managed not to protect himselfs but others. And the blind love for Wesker is so heart threatend!

Pls continue both hehe~
person Corrupted Sanctuary
schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oho! My question has been answered - I really should look at profile pages or something, instead of guessing. Fellow fangirl author, meet fellow fangirl reader, LOL. How awesome. I should have guessed it, anyway. Most slash-writers tend to be female, anyway, from what I've read.

And wow, gee! You, good woman, have a talent for all areas! Characterization, dialogue AND descriptions! And you blended them so well with one another, it was practically seamless (I think I spelled that wrong, ANYWAYZ). Yes, I'm hyped up, because I feel like I hit the jackpot in finding you and your Wesker/Chris stories and how skillful they are in all my favourite areas. 'Bribery' and 'Elements' both showcase your skills in the writing craft, and in two different styles, so yes! I am hyper as f*ck. XD It's like asking for vanilla and chocolate ice cream and getting them meshed with strawberry... FOR FREE, that it is AWESOME.

... I don't have much to add, that I'm sure others haven't already...

Eh. Well, I do. ANYWAY, I may as well say/type it and be embarrassed about it afterwards: You know you're a good author when...

A female reader reading about two men going at it, wishes she was suddenly gay and very much a man. And very much in either's position.

Anyway, done embarrassing myself. Over and out!

Wonderful story, has great, firm hold on the reader's mind, and best of tidings,

C.S.
person Anon
schedule April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was totally awesome! Very hot and sexy and you portrayed Wesker as the kind of delicious bastard that I know he is. I'm looking forward to reading more of this :)
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE Write more on this and the other Wesker/Chris story you have.
schedule February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good stuff, for sure. Few typos, but the writing itself was very good and didn't distract. I fully support writing something with the elder Chris. He aged like a fine wine -.o And we all know Wesker will think there is more fun to be had with a likely -more- independent Chris.
schedule February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aye! =D I love this story so far, Chris reminds me of me =[ helplessly in love, except I love a straighty and would do just about anything for this person ;_;. Chris is so cute though =] thinking deep down there's some good in Wesker...the oral scene was hawt <.< Wesker had to ruin it w/ mouthing off about Jill though <.>;.