rate_review Reviews

Nice story! Makes me wonder if there are more Tetris fics :)

Brilliant. This gave me a good and much needed laugh. XD

Cute!

Brilliant.

I love it.

Okay that was....I really don't know what it was but I liked it i can honsetly say I've seen a lot of starnge things on the internet but a Tetris fic of any kind is somthing i never thought of.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

I was linked to this story and really loved it. Very, very creative. Keep up the great work.

I definately loved this one. I was just flitting through the forums and happened to catch the link for this story and my god, you did an excellent job. It was highly entertaining and you managed to write about a difficult...er... pleasure partner. Great job ^^

...Snicker! So cute... poor Tet-ress... lezzie machines FTW... awrrr, I feel so bad for my XBox now (though I have been known to kiss her... maybe she's okay -- maybe she's a boy!... maybe she's anti-social...). I guess my old Super-Nintendo was happy, cos I played good Tetris... if she was lezzie, too (or a boy, and socialized). If not, s/he may be feeling violated, be suffering with PTSD, and... oh, no! :o I will have to fit in some Zuma, later.

But you make me itch to Round-Robin this one...

See, now, I'm already having ideas for Ms. Pac-Man. All that noms, noms, noms, and "Ooh, here comes a big one!"... or, or, "That Pac-'Man' ain't nothin' but a scrub! Daaaayum, tho! Blinky, he ain't just RED, he re~ed HOT. ...Huh, I reckon I do wonder what's under that sheet. Oh, nooo! -- he's coming for me...!" and, her "running away", and her pink bow, all sagging and mussed -- !!

Buwait! this is a review for you. Look what you've done. Kkkeck, ahem -- hrmn.

I liked it... obviously, I think. I get into the weird stuff -- I mean, weird like, "No one's ever done this before (that I know of)... and for good reason... but, wow!" stuff. You've got the mind for the out-there things -- love it!

There were no errors I saw, either, which is another neat trick. Good spelling and grammar habits aside, when you are writing your own thing, your eyes kind of fade off of catching any errors -- easy to miss, but you didn't.

And of course, you were a great sport to take up the challenge, in the first place -- I bet it was a challenge fortrue, too. I most officially give you a standing O (which could be dangerous, considered in context of this story -- I love hands).

[Oooh, ooh oh! you should totally write another like this one, but for the Forum's ibProBattle! Like... the one girl's profile has had her fill of being attacked by Player again and again, and the frustration is getting the best of her. But this time, she's not just a poor Nintendo -- she's got the benefit of IP's and cookies (num) and the whole 'net! She finally hunts him down through the Internet, tracing the smell of those sparking contrails, the vapors of his war-born sweat, which still permeate her trembling and heartlessly used code -- what does he think she IS, a machine?! As she follows her "scentsors" (boo, hiss), she builds her body of bits and bytes, forming herself into the shape of Player's profile's avatar, having no other lead for a costume. And she'll finally get to him, looking like some sort of dream-vision...only to tie poor Player down and make him cry. Tsk!]

I need some water, lol. Liked it lots!

Chow for niao,
Dee Dubbya/Jaxxy/Dream Wyvern

An absolutely brilliant story. I've read several others of yours, and this one seems to do the best job of showing off the talent you have with words. Your other works that I've read were great, but your ability in this one to demonstrate such a wonderfully human personality in such an exceptionally NOT human character is what really sets this one head and shoulders above the rest.

Well, it's true! You CAN write a great Tetris story. I'd never have considered approaching it that way, but you've really got it nailed down in a way that works. It's undeniably erotic at the core.