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for Sweet surrender

by moonlightopal

schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. Kept me smiling.
schedule January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A masterpiece! I THOROUGHLY enjoyed that story from start to finish. Your writing was perfect, your characterisation was just fantastic. The little touches like Sem having to walk carefully on tiles not designed for hooves just made the story something else. Fark! I love this! I was grinning like mad when Mel stopped her (without wanting to give too much of the story away to anyone else,but you know, that part hahaha!) And the image of him in black leathers and white swashbuckler shirt doing that? *drool* Wow, if had a criteria for a story that made me swoon, this one would have met every single measure. I loved it! Now I'm motivated to stop being so slack and level my toons to 80 so I can see Dalaran baha! This is so well done...I loved it and can't wait to read anything else you write. Man...Mel...perfect! hehehe!