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schedule July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've just read all 3 of the Nessa and Karasae stories, and I gotta say, they are really good! Hot, kinky, emotional, has a plot... I could go on, but I think you get it. Please post the next story in the series soon, I can't wait to read it!
person firemage
schedule April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay, update! I'm rather... addicted... to this story, and to your writing in general. Very glad to see the story continuing :D
schedule February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I feel like I need to respond to you somehow, so I guess I'm leaving a review on my own story to do it. Though for the most part I've refrained from any actual lore or even lore based story, that may change in later stories. Granted, I'm going to be taking a break from Nessa and Karasae to work on another character after this is complete (nothing to do with warcraft), but that will give me time to think about where to go from here. It's tempting, and who doesn't want to see something with (insert prominent faction leader here)? Thanks for the reviews. I hope I can write better stories for you in the future, you all certainly deserve it.
schedule February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm sad to hear you haven't been feeling well. I hope you are feeling better soon...

I really liked this chapter. The thing that grabbed me especially was the part where they said that the Cenarian Circle were working to resolve the differences between Horde and Alliance. I mean, basically they have the same ideals/goals etc, so it really is just a bit old that they keep carrying on. I mean, in CoT the Alliance have to save Thrall. Game/story wise, what the hell for? He bats for the other team, dagnabbit! We should be getting honour points for killing him (after I have my wicked way with him first though, heheh) but...it's just weird.

So I've been thinking...

Blizz should make it so that the Horde and Alliance get over themselves, as per Cenarian Circle goals, and they should unite against Death Knights! :D

I mean, I love Dks and all...unless they are killing me, of course - which happens far too often for my liking - I don't think too much of them then, but story wise, I really don't think they should have abandoned the Lich King. They should make it so DKs are everyone's enemy...mainly so I can drool over Thassarian and the Lich King in the same place because I'm all for time efficiency :P

To your story though...I really like this chapter. Normally I'd hope the Night elf scratched Nessa's eyes out but like Elspeth, your writing is so good you keep making me like them! It's just wrong to be so good! Stop it!
schedule January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow that latest chapter is delicious. I've used a cream similar to the gel you described IRL and you portrayed it beautifully, even though our more recent use of it has mainly been by myself to heighten anticipation when I have a surprise waiting for my husband when he gets home from work.
schedule January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooh a new kink! Fascinating!
schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story as usual. Can't wait for more.

And Fawnheart, while I'm truly Horde at heart, I hold no ill will towards the Alliance (as you well know). My first characters were Alliance and they'll always hold a special place for me.

The demon's not dead, right? Just "dismissed" type of thing?
schedule January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant, again! I love your writing. It's so perfect it makes me feel ill with jealousy hehe. Engaging plots and perfect prose, just magic! And don't worry about not liking alliance either, I think I'm outnumbered on this site by about 2000 to one. Everyone seems to be Horde, which just goes to prove that you Horde are all RANDY BUGGERS!!!! More so than alliance...

Hehe.

Nice work, I can't wait to see what Nessa gets up to next!