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by draygon

person Anon
schedule January 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
no, fawkes is female
person Judiff
schedule August 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! I went looking specifically for a Fawkes/lone wanderer story and this is perfect. More, more!
schedule October 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Meh, it was alright. I'd give it a 6 out of 10. Characters weren't exactly embellished upon in any own way, all the character depth was taken directly from the writing of the game developers without much innovation of the writer's own. Plus it also read a lot like a really cheesy romance novel. Like, cheesy by romance novel standards. On the flip side it was grammatically delicious, with proper punctuation, capitalization, and paragraphing, so at least the knowledge of the writing was fantastic, even if the story itself seemed a bit lackluster. I also give it points for originality, even I never really considered a Fawkes/female PC/NPC pairing.

So yeah, it wasn't bad.
person anon
schedule September 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yea! super mutant + human smut. First time i ever saw this kind of fic. I saw some whack shyt. Deathclaw/human, ghoul/human, even the yaoigua/human or whatever it was call, the one that looks like a cross btw a werewolf and a bear.... but this is the first supermutant/human and i've been looking for this. Damn, and its well written too not like some of those other fallout anthro must fics that sucks in description term and has some OC deathclaw chars that dont act as fierce as the real deathclaw and unrealistic anotomy. Can you do a super mutant behemoth/LW next please?
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was good! I never thought about making a Fallout Fic and this one was great! I hope you write more on it.
person Anon Nona
schedule January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it! *Grovels*