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January 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
First off, HOW COULD YOU STOP AT THAT SPOT?! You're mean and cruel!
I'm really glad Ambergale and Hawk got what was coming to them. Summerdrake is my new hero, even if I don't remember the awesomeness of her running straight off a cliff. It was really enjoyable watching her cut them down, and Malton realizing the extent after talking to his friend afterward.
It's also nice seeing that they made a tradition with the Nuzzrim's Revenge. Though it seems to change between Nuzzrin, Nuzzrim and Nuzzrum haha. I guess it depends on how drunk they are after it ruins their throat.
I really liked the sitting riddle, even though it was obvious where it was going. :) Totally set Malton up, the wuss. Even if it's part of his charm as a muscular non-combatant. I wonder if Gil' thinks that's the only way he can get Malton?
As for the name, I think you should change it to the real NPC's name. I haven't leveled an alt in a while, but it's nice seeing the fact this was based off of a quest in the game and recognizing the NPCs from the story. *shrug* Might be jus' me.
I'm really glad Ambergale and Hawk got what was coming to them. Summerdrake is my new hero, even if I don't remember the awesomeness of her running straight off a cliff. It was really enjoyable watching her cut them down, and Malton realizing the extent after talking to his friend afterward.
It's also nice seeing that they made a tradition with the Nuzzrim's Revenge. Though it seems to change between Nuzzrin, Nuzzrim and Nuzzrum haha. I guess it depends on how drunk they are after it ruins their throat.
I really liked the sitting riddle, even though it was obvious where it was going. :) Totally set Malton up, the wuss. Even if it's part of his charm as a muscular non-combatant. I wonder if Gil' thinks that's the only way he can get Malton?
As for the name, I think you should change it to the real NPC's name. I haven't leveled an alt in a while, but it's nice seeing the fact this was based off of a quest in the game and recognizing the NPCs from the story. *shrug* Might be jus' me.
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October 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
amg took you long enough to update ;-;
Write moar plx kthnx
Write moar plx kthnx
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October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Send more updates! I love this story!
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October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww, lol, poor Hawk and Amberglade! I love those two haha. Seriously, they are brilliant arseholes hey lol. I don't know why you thought the other chapter was boring. It's brilliant now, of course but it was great before. And sif I'd ever have enough of you, wonderboy! You rock!
I *seriously* love what you did with Gil this chapter though. What a lethal, fiery little brawler lol. Although he isn't that little I suppose. I like how Hawk didn't back down either (was too daft to?) and just went 'dark'. lol, I love stoopid villians, makes me wanna eat them alive lol. And I LOVE LOVE LOVE Amberglade. She rocks hahahaha. Seriously, I *saw* her fall out into the field, swearing her head off lol. She cracks me up something bad lol. Whadda bitch!
And of course, Mal...how I love the little puffed up muscle ball, let me count the ways lol. Poor thing, having to save the bastards from Gil. In another life I bet he'd wish he could just let the elf go and tear them apart :p Glad he didn't though. I love those two lol.
Brilliant as always wonderboy. You could make two flies mating on a piece of turd into a literary masterpiece! :D
I *seriously* love what you did with Gil this chapter though. What a lethal, fiery little brawler lol. Although he isn't that little I suppose. I like how Hawk didn't back down either (was too daft to?) and just went 'dark'. lol, I love stoopid villians, makes me wanna eat them alive lol. And I LOVE LOVE LOVE Amberglade. She rocks hahahaha. Seriously, I *saw* her fall out into the field, swearing her head off lol. She cracks me up something bad lol. Whadda bitch!
And of course, Mal...how I love the little puffed up muscle ball, let me count the ways lol. Poor thing, having to save the bastards from Gil. In another life I bet he'd wish he could just let the elf go and tear them apart :p Glad he didn't though. I love those two lol.
Brilliant as always wonderboy. You could make two flies mating on a piece of turd into a literary masterpiece! :D
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March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow...you are soooo good! What stuck out the most in this chapter? What DIDN'T stick out? hahahah there's sooooo much good shit in here. Kk, my favourite part, well one of them, was OF COURSE Malton's big green dick hahahaha I was cracking up, half at the mental image of him rocking on his heels, looking around at the mountains while doing a camel impersonation with water retention :P and then half with lust at his big, green .... woo hoo o.0 hahaha but I'm sure that doesn't come as a shock :p
I have to say though, I looooovvvveeee Hawk and Amberglade. I can't help it, I always love arseholes and those two are just brilliant. I love the part where Amberglade tumbles out of the weeds hahahaha I just LOVE her! Her and Hawk just ooze personality, kind of like a big green slime :P But honestly, they are so vivid. I think it's because the whole chapter was at this nice, rolling pace, full of Mal and 'Varin's comfortable companionship, and then whoomp! Arrows and Hawk and Amberglade tumbling out of the leaves lol. I just love this! Yeah, some Hawk and Amberglade sex, I think she should bust his balls hahaha NO NO NO!!! LET THEM BOTH CHOW DOWN ON MAL'S BIG GREEN...YEE HAA!!! hahaha.
Dagnabbit lol.
You are so good!
I have to say though, I looooovvvveeee Hawk and Amberglade. I can't help it, I always love arseholes and those two are just brilliant. I love the part where Amberglade tumbles out of the weeds hahahaha I just LOVE her! Her and Hawk just ooze personality, kind of like a big green slime :P But honestly, they are so vivid. I think it's because the whole chapter was at this nice, rolling pace, full of Mal and 'Varin's comfortable companionship, and then whoomp! Arrows and Hawk and Amberglade tumbling out of the leaves lol. I just love this! Yeah, some Hawk and Amberglade sex, I think she should bust his balls hahaha NO NO NO!!! LET THEM BOTH CHOW DOWN ON MAL'S BIG GREEN...YEE HAA!!! hahaha.
Dagnabbit lol.
You are so good!
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March 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's awesome! XD Haha, it's so much fun~. ^_^ Other than those elves being bullies. -.- But the writing itself is very fun to read! ^_^
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February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nice story, very funny, I look forward to more
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January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Easily the funniest thing I've read in a long time. More, please?
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January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great job. I was laughing through most of part 2. The way he played those elves was awesome. Your descriptions were beautiful (not to mention good)! Want more!
When are the naughty bits? *pout*
When are the naughty bits? *pout*
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January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
One of the best written orcs I have ever read. Your style is very interesting and the story flows pretty well. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please continue it!