rate_review Reviews

Really great piece of writing, one of my favorite characters and you really captured her personality as the lone hunter of the Squad.

The writing felt a little odd at some points... hard to describe, but nothing serious. That's the only "bad" things I have to say; I liked this one and it gave me a lot of thoughts. Like imagining using CP on Marina and her battle avatar shows her nude from the waist up. One thing I kind of expected because of how much Marina is into hunting, but didn't see, was a little one-on-one with her sniper rifle. Intimacy with her weapon, etc.

Sorry about the somewhat OOC Marina and such. I would have expanded a lot with this but people were demanding I post this regardless. Maybe I'll tinker with it and such.

Fun story. Sexy Marina. I deployed her that mission also, but she did not see much action up on the roof.
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