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March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Another Mirror's Edge fic. I just got one up too. It's a shame it doesn't have it's own little section, Faith n Cel are HOT! Anyway, loved your fic! Lots of little things like the movements they make and even a few possitions they use. (Don't often see tribadism, but I love it!) And the dialogue as well as both characters are very well developed and I feel true to their original selves. Good job, I enjoyed it! Hope you'll consider reading mine and letting me know what you think.
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January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the review, I really appreciate it! It flatters me greatly that you say it enhanced your experience of the game. I mean that man, thanks again.
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January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I read this story shortly after I had played Mirror's Edge for the first time, after it had been released for the PC. It was a real addition to my gaming experience with ME. It's well written as far as I can judge as a non-native english speaker. Some scenes like the undressing part could have been a little slower and more detailed but that's an individual matter of taste. However, altogether it's a very well written piece of fan fiction. Great work!