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March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
An interesting pairing, but it DOES make sense. :P
It was written very well for a short story, just enough plot to get into the yaoi, and the finish was great as well. It left me satisfied reading it...also, My favorite part was definitely "IT'S A CRITICAL HIT!" I laughed out loud literally XD
I look foward to more shorts.
It was written very well for a short story, just enough plot to get into the yaoi, and the finish was great as well. It left me satisfied reading it...also, My favorite part was definitely "IT'S A CRITICAL HIT!" I laughed out loud literally XD
I look foward to more shorts.
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December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great stuff!
This was really a sweet little story you made here. Great passion, a little awkward, a little clumsy, and it all seemed to go together very well. you're a great writer, I have no complaints about the spelling or grammar, and the story was easy to follow even though I've never played FE10. The "just enough" detail gives it that sweet feeling that the characters really care for each other.
Excellent! I hope to see more of your writing!
This was really a sweet little story you made here. Great passion, a little awkward, a little clumsy, and it all seemed to go together very well. you're a great writer, I have no complaints about the spelling or grammar, and the story was easy to follow even though I've never played FE10. The "just enough" detail gives it that sweet feeling that the characters really care for each other.
Excellent! I hope to see more of your writing!
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December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww. No love for their gushing, sticky seed?