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for A Dream Came True

by Strangene

person elvareth
schedule December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know Wesker is not an OC, then it wouldn't be a crossover but for me he was like an OC because I didn't know who he was and even know when you said that it doesn't tell me much. I;m not interested in RE. But, whoever he is, I didn't review the characters but the way you fic was written and it actually was one huge pwp so not much to say about characters anyway :P
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! This was so good =D Very hot too ~_^
person elvareth
schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, the ending was cute. But I have a few other things to tell you. First about the rating, it was pure NC-17. R doesn't contain graphic sex. And the sexscene was actually pretty good maybe not the best but quite good. Maybe if you found a good beta you could fix it a bit.
Generally I don't read crossovers, it's probably first or second I've ever read only because I needed a yaoi fic and there's nothing new in the fandom that's worth reading, so I decided to give it a try. I don't know who the hell is Wesker, where he comes from. Do foe me he was an OC.
The fic wasn't bad, but just like I said - beta could help you improve it. The way you write is nice :)
schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Justine,
Thank you for your remarks! ^^ I'll try to find a beta and work to improve my writing.
Wesker is not an OC. He is a character from Resident Evil series, a former police officer (and Umbrella researcher) who was infected with T-virus and became a living bioweapon with superhuman abilities.
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg, I still can't believe it. XD
you did a great job with this one!!! (and to think that I just had reviewed the other story... while you were posting the next... so funny. ^^)
love it to pieces, really I do!!! they're both sooo sexy! *kyaaa* XD