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for Clearer in Time

by ericblaire

person Jarty
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Even though I hated that you put Ganondorf with Zelda I won't hold it aginist you it is still a good story and I hope you put Zelda and Link together can't wait for the enxt chapter
person Jarty
schedule February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love the chapter I hope you will soon show ZeLink can't wait for the next chapter
person Jarty
schedule February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
When is the next chapter coming up
person mikey
schedule February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ah about buming me out don worry about it i went back and re-read the whole story and year i supose it makes mroe sence to leave it like this i like that chapter btw gave me a nice laugh haeing saria kiss vatti lol pretty cool bring him in but for the love of GOD dont bring the freaking talking hat in! ANYTHING BUT THAT! that thing drove me crazy when i was palying it. nice bit with navi btw cantw ait to see how that affects upcomeing chapters btw an idea if you will sence he cahnced the past when he goes back he might rember things a bit difrently for the reason taht they would be sence he changed the past know what i mean? it be a bitdifrent once he gets back deosint affect him but he just rembers a sence difrently yet at the same time he rembers the first one to just an idea for ya
person mikey
schedule February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i like it however i am a bit disapointed that was wone of my fav pairings however i have an idea for an edit mabye you loet them get a LITTLE carred away such as oral or something but link stoping before it goes to far ... but then again that might make her jsut as mad .. hmmm idk its your choice however like always BRILLIANT
person Sweetest
schedule February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OK, I had to review again since you asked for input. :)

Well...honestly I'm not big on lil Saria having sex with Link. Especially not now. But, as far as a lil kissing is concerned...that's fine. So yeah, there can be some intimacy, yet I don't think Link would just bang another girl once he feels emotionally attached to someone. He seems like decent guy.

Thanx for the super fast update!
person videogameguy10
schedule January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. Please keep it up.

I would like to see a Saria/Link chapter. It was mentioned that Saria is confused about the feelings that she is having. Link could act as a source of knowledge for her to explain what is happening to her, since he has been seven years into the future and had experience with similar emotions.
person mikey
schedule January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT MAN! and yea i got the tp refrance not that hard to catch when Minda explains it to you in TP but yea that was the gods exileing her tribe wasint it? to the twilight realm? right? well tahts my ges anyway but damn man thats beautiful lol ic antw ait tos ee the reuinion lol keep up with the good work man
person Sweetest
schedule January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I luv the fact that this is not polluted with a bunch of yaoi couples! Ugh. So many Zelda fics have yaoi in 'em. I really hate when they make Sheik an actual male and not female--like the character truly was in the game. Don't see how girls can get so obsessed with men on men action, instead of het. I mean, wouldn't you want men to want WOMEN?! Just don't get it...

Anyhow, enough ranting. Great story! Luv the pairings...even if there was a touch of yaoi between Dark and Link. But at least there was no intercourse. Lol. Nice job, I'll be looking for an update soon! O and thanx for finally letting 'Sheik' and Link get together. XD Kinda thought there would always be some kinda interruption before they would do somethin'.
person NinjaSheik
schedule January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
KYAA~!!! KYAA~!! KYAA~!! SO CUTE!! AWESOME JOB!1 SHEIKX LINK FOREVER!!! UPDATE SOON!!!