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April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooohhh The ending was soooo cute!!! Even though I'm sad for Zelda. Poor girl. :( But it still was cool and cute! specially the remembering things! SO CUTE!!!!! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE Alright alright
I liked most of all it besides that you made Link a man whore. He just liked to sleep around with like every girl or at least do stuff... O_o OH OH OH AND I LOVED THAT You brought Dark Link back!!! YAYAYA Happy endings for almost every one!!! XD ^_^
I liked most of all it besides that you made Link a man whore. He just liked to sleep around with like every girl or at least do stuff... O_o OH OH OH AND I LOVED THAT You brought Dark Link back!!! YAYAYA Happy endings for almost every one!!! XD ^_^
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March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This review contains spoilers.
I just read the whole thing. Grammar errors aside, it was a cool read. I enjoyed the changes to the main story you made, such as turning the Lens of Truth into a mental device, and the addition of Navi near the end rather than the start (I actually didn't even notice she was absent until she was mentioned).
I also liked how you turned Dark Link into some kind of anti-hero, but up until the end I wondered what he was going to accomplish against his creator, and sure enough, he stood NO CHANCE AT ALL and basically got creamed.
I wouldn't have it any other way. =D Well done on that. Speaking of Dark Link, I thought it was exceptionally cool how some of the bosses were actually Ganondorf scheming behind the scenes.
The multiple personalities of Zelda and Sheik were an interesting twist that I thought was pretty neat. I thought for sure a threesome was coming...
I wasn't too keen on the addition of Vaati. His addition to the story seemed too abrupt for him to actually mean anything to me, but you used him well enough once he was introduced.
I also liked how Link didn't survive the battle. It's an interesting change to "defeat the villain, save the princess, get laid, happily ever after" and I for one am glad it happened.
All in all, it was an enjoyable read, and while reading this I could not stop thinking about how Twisted Futurity was never finished. If you haven't read it, dig for it on this site. It's absolutely incredible.
Nice work!
I just read the whole thing. Grammar errors aside, it was a cool read. I enjoyed the changes to the main story you made, such as turning the Lens of Truth into a mental device, and the addition of Navi near the end rather than the start (I actually didn't even notice she was absent until she was mentioned).
I also liked how you turned Dark Link into some kind of anti-hero, but up until the end I wondered what he was going to accomplish against his creator, and sure enough, he stood NO CHANCE AT ALL and basically got creamed.
I wouldn't have it any other way. =D Well done on that. Speaking of Dark Link, I thought it was exceptionally cool how some of the bosses were actually Ganondorf scheming behind the scenes.
The multiple personalities of Zelda and Sheik were an interesting twist that I thought was pretty neat. I thought for sure a threesome was coming...
I wasn't too keen on the addition of Vaati. His addition to the story seemed too abrupt for him to actually mean anything to me, but you used him well enough once he was introduced.
I also liked how Link didn't survive the battle. It's an interesting change to "defeat the villain, save the princess, get laid, happily ever after" and I for one am glad it happened.
All in all, it was an enjoyable read, and while reading this I could not stop thinking about how Twisted Futurity was never finished. If you haven't read it, dig for it on this site. It's absolutely incredible.
Nice work!
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March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great Story! This is probably one of the best Zelda fanfictions I've read! Keep up the good work :D
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March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
fraking awesome
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March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely Beautiful.
I had some qualms with how the story had ended initially, but I'm glad I read on to the epilogue. This very script, perchance less the adult content, would make for an epic remake of Ocarina of Time. And I tell you now, I'm in tears. I haven't cried over a story since... I must have been a rather young child, to say so, but even at that, this story moves me to tears.
You're incredibly talented.
Don't EVER give up writing. If you aren't published yet, I'm sure you will be some day. This story is proof enough. Thank you for writing it, from the bottom of my heart. Thank you.
Every second I spent reading this, was absolutely worth it in every way.
Cordially yours,
The Doc.
I had some qualms with how the story had ended initially, but I'm glad I read on to the epilogue. This very script, perchance less the adult content, would make for an epic remake of Ocarina of Time. And I tell you now, I'm in tears. I haven't cried over a story since... I must have been a rather young child, to say so, but even at that, this story moves me to tears.
You're incredibly talented.
Don't EVER give up writing. If you aren't published yet, I'm sure you will be some day. This story is proof enough. Thank you for writing it, from the bottom of my heart. Thank you.
Every second I spent reading this, was absolutely worth it in every way.
Cordially yours,
The Doc.
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March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is truly excellent. You really know how to write!
You should consider doing a twilight princess fic at some point.
You should consider doing a twilight princess fic at some point.
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March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Apart from some minor grammar errors, there was nothing I could really pick out.
Nice ending. I appreciated that you put the time and effort into finishing the story. It was most definitely worth the read. I hope you continue to write and am anxious to see what your next work is.
Nice ending. I appreciated that you put the time and effort into finishing the story. It was most definitely worth the read. I hope you continue to write and am anxious to see what your next work is.
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March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Spectacular ending to a spectacular fic. Thank you for the happy ending. I'll be keeping an eye on you in future. One more thing........ SEQUEL? (either direct or based on TP or WW)
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March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good ending but WAY TOO SAD. Why not, finally, leave everyone happy. The epilogue better be happier.
On a side note, Ocarinas game ending caused a split time-line. Do I smell a (hopefully happier) sequel?
On a side note, Ocarinas game ending caused a split time-line. Do I smell a (hopefully happier) sequel?
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March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lovely. Beautiful, even. And I loved the tragic ending :'( I don't like emoticons, but it feels appropriate here.
And sorry, I do plan on updating, but neither my brain nor my computer is working very well as of late.
That being said, although I'm not much of a writer I'm impressed with both the quality and quantity you produced in (what is to me) such a short time.
Great work.
And sorry, I do plan on updating, but neither my brain nor my computer is working very well as of late.
That being said, although I'm not much of a writer I'm impressed with both the quality and quantity you produced in (what is to me) such a short time.
Great work.