rate_review Reviews

A beautiful end to a very imaginative spin on an old Zelda story. You definitely have a knack for storytelling. The 'smut' content was beautifully done, and in a way that it didn't interfere with the story, or seem like a focal point, but something that just happened in the course of events. And though I have not played many of the LoZ games, I have heard of Vaati, and his appearance here only further cemented him as one of my favorite characters. Though, I do hope that Ruto gets a happy ending as well. I mean, when she awakens as a Sage, wouldn't she remember that, in a pas.. in a futu... in an alternate life, she and Link were engaged by Zora law? (ish?) I do hope she finds someone.

Also, it is very, /very/ unfair to give out hints of epic adventures in the epilogue! I do hope that at some point in the future, you expand on those and write more awesome fanfics taking place in a darker, more adult world of the LoZ games mentioned like you did here. I actually cried when Dark Link was forced to stab Link, and then himself was eliminated by Ganon.

Also, it is a little bit of a shame that the whole "Dark Link seducing Link" in the first fight never went anywhere. That would have really make it more difficult for Link to keep his mind focused on the task at hand, trying to figure out why he was having these sorts of feelings with a man, his own dark self at that.

Also, loved the reference to Oracle of Seasons. That was a fun game!

And again, I do hope very much that you eventually write fanfics based on those games and adventures you mentioned int he Epilogue.

I am writing this review having just finished A Link to the Past III, and Vaati may not be from oot, but seeing him out of nowhere certainly made for a pleasant surprise as he is one of my favorite characters in Legend of Zelda, so far I've found this story quite well put together with a interesting cast of characters, and the Malon/ Dark Link pairing is quite an interesting idea I have to say, well thats it for now, thank you for providing such a wonderful story.

Well written and thus far I love the plot line. For some reason I find myself hoping that Ganon makes it up with Nabooru in the end. I might just be hopeful, but I thought they were rather cute as a couple and I hope that if all the other girls their little happy endings, I hope that Nabooru can have hers as well.

i absolutely love this im really getting into it! you a good writer!

i am in love. this story was amazing. the ending almost made me cry it was beyond perfict. thank you for the gift of your wrighting and i hope to read more form you.


with all my love The Maiden Lyra

That was great. I read it in one sitting couldn't stop.

Whoa, that was epic. Truely a great story! I was a bit worried in the last chapter, but you finished with a bang. Well done!:) Is there a sequel to this? I'm going to go check.
KM

Damn good story man. Probably the best Zelda fic that I have ever read. I was really impressed about the depth of emotion conveyed combined with ingenious use of plot. Keep writing, this story kicked ass.

i'll keep it brief this time (months after the story is done, GG self)
1: thanks for the counter review. makes me feel special.
2: thanks for the overall positive ending. i was feeling pretty down after watching code geass' "shoot you in the crotch" style ending, so a happy end was just what i needed.

PS i'm a dude :O
PPS I use lots of faces ^_^
PPPS final thanks for a great rendition of oot.

I don't know what you guys are thinking. That ganon and Zelda match was hot and totally made sense!! It was hot to.. O_o Very hot!