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July 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is so cute! And kind of sad too, when you think about what happens on Misty Island... but then Hush and Understanding happen, so it's all good. XD
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December 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
::blush:: My absolute favorite Pre-Jak ever, the fluff is in all the right places. ^.^ I love how Jak is so curious and surprises Daxter sometimes. The best sweet ending that still includes some entertaining bits too, detail and the way it flows is exactly like water. Plus Jak getting shoved off the window and how surprised that Daxter is kissing him is plain priceless. Well I’m gonna shut up now ^_^’
Kiku-san
Kiku-san
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October 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this was such a marvelous story! Especially the scene near the end where Dax admits that he wanted Jak to come to his defense. It was so incredibly touching that my heart almost melted. Sometimes, you just make my day, you know that?
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July 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hate not having alerts for updates!
You've welded angst, sex and fluff into a truely beautiful piece of work. Two thumbs up!
You've welded angst, sex and fluff into a truely beautiful piece of work. Two thumbs up!
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April 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Freakin amazing dude. I loved it! I like how you had it build up over time gaps instead of just suddenly happening. Great job, really and turally a great job. And sometimes stories just call for sappy endings.
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April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This has been one of the best reads I have had in a long time...
You are a genius, and I thank you for the story...
You are a genius, and I thank you for the story...
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April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Do you have any updates on when we might see that other story that was mentioned???
I know it isn't nice to ask, I get annoyed when my fans ask that of me anyway, but I just cannot help myself...
I know it isn't nice to ask, I get annoyed when my fans ask that of me anyway, but I just cannot help myself...
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April 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aaaawwww! This was adorable! No lemon, but there's always he sequal... Jeez, this was just adorable and hot all at once! I can't wait for the sequal, good luck!
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April 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A beautiful ending to a beautiful fic *sheds tear*. I'm so glad that I checked for updates twice today!
I have to admit, I was wondering if you were going to go all the way with them in this chapter, but the 'mutual lovemaking' fits much better. The final transition from puppy love to full on companionship was also rendered near perfectly. Again, your fluff reigns supreme in the JxD fandom. I mean, that whole ordeal with Samos and that first kiss was just...damn! Also, the lemony goodness you snuck in to balance out the bales of fluff kept either from appearing overdone.
As usual your writing skills are really impressive with practically no spelling or grammar errors. The "sedate pace" near the beginning was a little awkward though (sorry, bad habit of mine). Are you an English major or something?
All in all, this was a great conclusion to this piece of work, and I'm really looking forward to the follow up fic (as well as the next arc of Talk to Me).
Keep up the great writing, and good luck on your finals!
I have to admit, I was wondering if you were going to go all the way with them in this chapter, but the 'mutual lovemaking' fits much better. The final transition from puppy love to full on companionship was also rendered near perfectly. Again, your fluff reigns supreme in the JxD fandom. I mean, that whole ordeal with Samos and that first kiss was just...damn! Also, the lemony goodness you snuck in to balance out the bales of fluff kept either from appearing overdone.
As usual your writing skills are really impressive with practically no spelling or grammar errors. The "sedate pace" near the beginning was a little awkward though (sorry, bad habit of mine). Are you an English major or something?
All in all, this was a great conclusion to this piece of work, and I'm really looking forward to the follow up fic (as well as the next arc of Talk to Me).
Keep up the great writing, and good luck on your finals!
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March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I finally Managed to get an account set up here! =]
"Heh-Hum" 'Mortal Kombat Announcer' Say's: "IT'S OFFICIAL! YOU ROCK!" =]
Firstly, I have to apologise for not reviewing this sooner, and secondly, This is full of Winabillity! =] No more fake-English for your sake.
I really enjoyed reading this. Really with a capital R. You have portrayed Jak And Dax in one of the best ways possible, and kept true to the fluffy style I've grown to love =] I had to stop myself from squeeing, a very embarrasing thing for a male to do =]
This story, all of it, is extremely well done. From the tantalising backgrounds, to the seamless interaction between the two stars. Seriously, the way these two interact is so scarily similar to my own experiences it's frightening o_O The realism it introduces, brings in a very effective depth to the story. =]
I love how you seamlessly combine the love/lust the two are experiencing with fluff and humour the next, and I find your non-descriptive style only adds to the sweetness of the atmosphere, while simultaneously galvanising my imagination.
The word choice is brilliant, the portrayal and attention to character is really good. I love the little nuances you add =]. Daxter being adverse to 'cuddly stuff' brings a smile to my face, and really fits in with his character!
I adored the bit where Dax pleaded in chapter three, and Jak was sooo guilty =]. Just made me go awwwwww....And I hate to tell you this Robin =] But your Allicat's and Crocadogs? Stolen XD. That has got to be one of the best pseudo-canon sayings I've read to date, and fits very well with the feeling in the fic =]
I loved perusing it, am satisfyed that not only have you retained your skill, but improved upon it, and avidly salivate over the prospect of more content =]
It was grrreat!
Wanna do it again? ;D
Peace & Roses
Your Faithful Follower
Connor
"Heh-Hum" 'Mortal Kombat Announcer' Say's: "IT'S OFFICIAL! YOU ROCK!" =]
Firstly, I have to apologise for not reviewing this sooner, and secondly, This is full of Winabillity! =] No more fake-English for your sake.
I really enjoyed reading this. Really with a capital R. You have portrayed Jak And Dax in one of the best ways possible, and kept true to the fluffy style I've grown to love =] I had to stop myself from squeeing, a very embarrasing thing for a male to do =]
This story, all of it, is extremely well done. From the tantalising backgrounds, to the seamless interaction between the two stars. Seriously, the way these two interact is so scarily similar to my own experiences it's frightening o_O The realism it introduces, brings in a very effective depth to the story. =]
I love how you seamlessly combine the love/lust the two are experiencing with fluff and humour the next, and I find your non-descriptive style only adds to the sweetness of the atmosphere, while simultaneously galvanising my imagination.
The word choice is brilliant, the portrayal and attention to character is really good. I love the little nuances you add =]. Daxter being adverse to 'cuddly stuff' brings a smile to my face, and really fits in with his character!
I adored the bit where Dax pleaded in chapter three, and Jak was sooo guilty =]. Just made me go awwwwww....And I hate to tell you this Robin =] But your Allicat's and Crocadogs? Stolen XD. That has got to be one of the best pseudo-canon sayings I've read to date, and fits very well with the feeling in the fic =]
I loved perusing it, am satisfyed that not only have you retained your skill, but improved upon it, and avidly salivate over the prospect of more content =]
It was grrreat!
Wanna do it again? ;D
Peace & Roses
Your Faithful Follower
Connor