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by Kradnohikari

schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What? Snot? Eeeew... You shouldn't write this >_<
Hehe.. sorry, don't listen to me. Your story is amazing, really.)
schedule November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was hot and would have been hotter without the word snot in it as many times as there was and in one line you said "she" instead of "he" o.O Removing his lip she couldn’t help the comment that slipped past his lips. see o.O but i did really like it xD