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I love the progression. Nothing like a drawn out bukkake fest to liven things up! To be honest though, the yaoi bit in chapter 3 kinda killed my boner. If Bernadette is up for a show, maybe you can have her masturbate some more while the recruits try to shoot their loads again on her pussy from a distance before moving on... like a contest.

If you're still taking in requests for which of your past stories to continue, I also vote for "Genso Freyjadour" because of the Sialeeds cliffhanger. One other story that had promise -- still has should you choose to follow-up on it -- is "Royal Bloodline" where you mentioned in passing Sialeeds sharing the prince with Miakis and Lyon at the same time. That has potential either as a separate story or as a special chapter. Your "Bathing in the ___" series to me seemed like an excellent vehicle to maybe show more of the other characters participating in orgies (your forte) in possible sequels.

As for some older stories, "On A Sunny Day" for Suikoden 3 I felt needed more closure on the Hugo/Lilly front with some good farewell sex between them and Lucia lending her assistance and expertise.

I absolutely love Bernadette's aattitude in this story. She's really sexy.

Ack! How Mean! Don't leave it like this! Please continue!!

That's not... a very proper review...

Thanks, everyone. In case chapter 2 isn't to your liking, I hope that chapter 3 will be better. I hear the requests for Secrets and Freyjadour, but it will still take some time for those.

Sperman, that's indeed the real me, but I haven't made up my mind about the website yet.

This has the looks to go into an extremely hot gangbang scene. Don't dissapoint me, Streti!

I propose you a link to 3 threads I did some time ago in CHYOO
http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main.story.page/66625
It doesn't have the premises of your story, because there's some non consent there, but I'd like to see some scenes like those in your story. Feel free to draw some inspiration there ;)

I've seen recently a TheStreti in CHYOO and I have the gut feeling that's you, am I right? ;)

I'd very much like to see this story continued--I've always liked your work, plus Bernadette is one of my favs, and she doesn't get much attention. A perfect match.

I would definitely love to see more of this story. Bernadette is one of my favorite Suikoden girls, and you're one of my favorite writers.

I wouldn't mind more of Secrets Under the Sun. The girls still aren't rid of their extra bits and I'd like to see more with Jean and the boys. But this one would be interesting too. Anything you want to write more of would be great.

Oh yeah! Definitely continue!