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October 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I read this back before when it was on the usual fanfiction but I seem to recal there being more chapters....(28 I think) may I ask WHY you have not posted the rest of them here?
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August 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 20. Calvin. I see what you did there.
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April 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh please add more, it is a great idea, I laughed, I cried, And maybe even got a little jealous of Mark *lol, not kidding*
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December 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yum, yaoi. These two are so cute together. Nice work with the characters. Like how you explained about Vaughn's hair, and personality. His mom is a riot. Good work.
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December 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this story made me scream because I never though to see yaoi of this pairing....
but I still kept on fucking reading it.
Great....really well done but I was wondering if you was going to finish it....*breathes* It's not my favorite pairing but it's hot and what the hell I am starting to like it like a closet freak.
anyway ignore the lack of reviews because this really needs more for a job well done
but I still kept on fucking reading it.
Great....really well done but I was wondering if you was going to finish it....*breathes* It's not my favorite pairing but it's hot and what the hell I am starting to like it like a closet freak.
anyway ignore the lack of reviews because this really needs more for a job well done
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December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It occured to me that I'm overdue to review this. Very overdue.
I'll start by saying that I don't play Harvest Moon at all [I find it boring], but that doesn't change the fact that, somehow, the fan writing around it is hot. This is one of the best examples of that. Without meaning to sound sexist at all, you're managing to combine character and relationship development in a romantic-but-not-ridiculous female way... while still tackling the sex head-on and not trying to flower it up unnecessarily or write 'around' it (Something that many female writers seem to be unable to do around here; perhaps it's due to your own mature relationship). It's impressive from writers regardless of gender.... and more than anything, the end result is hot.
Finally, I'm not sure how to say this without sounding a bit rude, but... where do you intend to end it? Do you intend to end it? I love the story, but I'm worried that you'll keep going while I'll have already grown past an interest in these characters... as will many readers. Not that I want to discourage you from continuing at all. I'm just curious.
~Genis Irving
I'll start by saying that I don't play Harvest Moon at all [I find it boring], but that doesn't change the fact that, somehow, the fan writing around it is hot. This is one of the best examples of that. Without meaning to sound sexist at all, you're managing to combine character and relationship development in a romantic-but-not-ridiculous female way... while still tackling the sex head-on and not trying to flower it up unnecessarily or write 'around' it (Something that many female writers seem to be unable to do around here; perhaps it's due to your own mature relationship). It's impressive from writers regardless of gender.... and more than anything, the end result is hot.
Finally, I'm not sure how to say this without sounding a bit rude, but... where do you intend to end it? Do you intend to end it? I love the story, but I'm worried that you'll keep going while I'll have already grown past an interest in these characters... as will many readers. Not that I want to discourage you from continuing at all. I'm just curious.
~Genis Irving