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for The Passionate Beat

by crymsonpassion

person Minamino
schedule September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So I review on the first chapter and don't review again til the last. I'm a naughty reader... What's even worse is that I didn't start reading this until yesterday. Bad Light!

But this was AWESOME! And holy crap, that lemon was hot! And oh, poor Demy for being with that damn Xigbar!!! >:( I nearly cried at that part. And such cute evil twins. XD. Nami and Larxene were great, too.
person Akaku
schedule August 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
THis cant be so!!! Its going to end soon?!? THe agony!!! I love yor story T^T ah well. At least it will always be here so i can reread anytime i want!! ^-^ Can't wait for next chapter
person Dumb Apple
schedule July 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Bwah~! You can't leave it there! Evil, evil, evil place to leave that chapter, damn you!

... but I love the story and I'm looking forward to more! :D
person Kaiten
schedule June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You should update this one instead.... Why? 'Cause i said so, dammit!!!
Anyways, kinda angst-y and a bit confusing, but still worth reading. You should work on your hooks a bit more, since i was starting to lose interest sometimes...
Also, I wanna hear Zex's side of the story.... is he missing dem? Was he hurt in the past? and why would Lex care if he was kissin' Dem?
But, yeah... I'll def. be checking for updates!!
person kinkou
schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Update. I was starting to go through withdrawls and had to keep rereadign the last chapter. hehehe.... *sniff* but poor Demy! *pouts* Hopefully this pain will be short lived. (at least on my end, lol ) . I can't wait for another update to this or Accidental.
person Wulfie89
schedule May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWW POOR DEMY!!!!*cries and huggies a Demy plushie.*Poor poor little Demy!!!

I can't wait to see what happens next!
person Meghan
schedule April 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fuck, I love this story, but I definitally need to read a twincest/AkuRiku lemon.
Update ASAP!
person Wulfie89
schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! Those last few lines made me laugh! Dude this story is awesome and I can't wait to see more of it.
person Zura
schedule March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It does annoy me a little that you still until now haven't decided if this is going to be Zemyx or Dexion (DEXION FTW!), seeing as many people does have left a review telling you. I do stand firm that this should be Dexion, even more after this chapter. A seme that acts like Zexion in this story isn't anything new, and boring like crap. An uke that acts like Zexion (devious, manipulating and so on) is FUN! Therefore Dexion is the way to go.

But whatever, I'll just have to wait and see I suppose. I do hope for Dexion anyway, or I'll just have to find another good story.
person NeonOranges
schedule March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I gotta say, I really hope Zexion in the seme for this pairing, because I just can't picture Demmy as anything but a total uke.