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for Relaxation is a sin

by NiuNiu

person punchbuggy
schedule January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
NNNNGUH THAT WAS GOOD
person Dragonite Himura
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great one-shot. Nice and long and a pleasure to read. One thing though; the split between mind and body had be scratching my head for a few moments. you might want to make that a bit more clear. Other than that, great job :3
person Ri
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was hot! I enjoyed it very much! And i really found a twist when you had Snake like in two places at once! Like what he just split himself!?! OMG really that got me! Anyways i really enjoyed this one and i do hope you plan on writing more on Snake and Raiden (love them!) so great job on this story ^__________^