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July 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very good job. I am also a fan of Banjo and Kazooie, and it never even crossed my mind that it could have porn in it, so when i first saw this catagory i looked at it for lolz. You proved me wrong.
I also liked the ending, Mumbo ROCKS!
I also liked the ending, Mumbo ROCKS!
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August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The story is intriguing, but you switch tenses way too much. It's distracting and annoying. Fix that and you'll be golden.
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November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice story! It was sweet and funny, yet still quite hot. Nice job! :3