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by sillyneko345

schedule July 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You know, I can't believe I was actually dubious about this fic at first. But you write a Keira I actually like! I would love to see more in this verse, especially between Jak and his little redheaded roommate, not to mention Tess and Keira!
person Anon
schedule November 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story. You should follow upon this with a little action. And yes, any expansion of interest does make you a more versatile writter.
person Csi Forsythe
schedule October 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah, the old dish soap trick.

This was a lovely story! (Can I just say, I love the subtle reference to Daxter at the end.)

You and your gorgeous girl!love are magnificently awesome!
schedule October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yuri's not my thing. But you make me like it. ♥ Realistic and I like your handle on the characters. Like always.