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for Human Desires

by rivornwen1987

person Messie
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was actually quite interesting.. and I'm in a lack of words (as always) to describe it much further =)
Though I am impressed with the well put lines and selected words, while still keeping it in a "rough" sexual fashion.
Also, to be honest, I'm a fan of the game, and this just made the night elves even more sexy and mysterious ^^'
Very well done!
person Messie
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok.. the second chapter was a bit rougher than the first one but still good ^^
In my opinion it took off a bit too fast but I guess it followed the whole "both want it" idea ;)
Very erotic and a nice end to it.. soft =3
Goodie! ^^
person KenRen
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Eeeeeeee!
That was so gentle and warm and cute =3
And I love it when people type the Troll's accent. =3
person KenRen
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooohhhhhh.
Rubbish? Pfffffft! Nevah!
*bounces around eagerly* Moar please!
person KenRen
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooohhh er. Want him, right now, plz.
Bit of a stallion no?

Also:
"with the confidence of a man who knew he was doing it right."
Duhhh! Blood Elf = cocky bastards.
But we like them that way. =3