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for Human Desires

by rivornwen1987

schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heh....Good story, Silly Silly Whore-Lock!
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
=3 Much much better. Nom-nom-nom.
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Serously. I think that may be a reason for me to actually -start- drinking.
Wayhey!
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Erm, squee?! =3 [Glomps him]
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
[Nod nod] Oh, so much better. [Glomps the Draenei] =3
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my bloody god! [Wiggles and slaps hands to they stop shaking an type] Oh my god! [Glomps you]
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
[Dies in a happy pile of much]
Seriously. That is all I have to say.
person KenRen
schedule October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nom nom nom. Draenei women <3
Tails ftw!
person Messie
schedule October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
While reading the third chapter.. I was like "ok, so we have a night elf story again.. hm.. ..... .. .. ... tusks? O.o" that's when I realized that it was trolls ;P .. also, loving the way you made him speak his words in patois ^^ Made it more obvious also with the whole troll thingy =3
Aaanyway, way goodie :P .. now to read the next.
person Messie
schedule October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I do prefer yuri/lesbian situations :D but I'm a guy so no biggie on that one ;P
A nice addition was the tail and it's "doings" ;) Though I can't seem to let go of the feeling that this chapter was rushed.. it was still very well written and had a very sensual story. Keep this up, and more yuri ^^'