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for Coma Blue

by Jakuro

person Jakuro
schedule August 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm going to re-vamp this story, add some more detail. It turned into a rushed smut when I wrote it. Expect mroe chapters after I finish the upcoming Coma Green ;)
person anonymous
schedule November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
really, very good. Youre talented, its not like reading most crap. you should definitly continue coma blue and black. hot.
person Anon
schedule November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awesome
person Monotov
schedule October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have read literally hundreds of these short stories but none have actually made me laugh. Good work.
person Knight
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Puts a thumbs up* Excellente!!! Do oyu plan for this to be a one shot or a longer continuation by chance? :O Ill check back in
case ye update!!!