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by YamzX

schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gotta agree with the previous reviewers, I think this is the best Megaman fic I've ever seen!

But.. Only one problem.

There's only ten chapters. :( You have to continue writing this or.. or.. I'll eat my socks!
person Ginasa
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is probably the best Megaman fanfic I've red yet. I hope to see you post soon, your writing skills are far better than I expected. Great with keeping the characters in character and a descriptive way of showing their emotions and thoughts.
person Ginasa
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This fic needs a lot more attention than what it's getting, I'll spread the word. X3
schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's me again! (reviewing ch. 5)

What can I say to show my appreciation for this story? It is rare to find a fic that is AU to be this engaging for me. I really love the fact of your deep thought on politics and real world decisions (your explanation of a police force morphing) and believable relationships. I can't wait to see this fic completed. Keep it up.

On the other hand, you do have a couple misspelled words here and there, careful editing will take care of that. Also, there are a couple sentences which don't make 100% sense. A good way to prevent this is to simply read your own fic aloud. You can catch a lot of errors by doing this.
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story was an absolute joy to read! Unlike a lot of fanfiction floating around, this one actually was cleverly spun. It is clear that you put your mind and heart into writing this. I hope you continue to write on this story. I most certainly will be watching.