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for Twenty-nine seconds to the end.

by SSjDiizoid

schedule April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the review, CrazyIvan.

To avoid spoiling too much, the two have an internal timer that counts down from about two or three days worth of seconds towards zero. Both must return to their creator and enter stasis chambers to reset the internal timers for another few days, otherwise they die.

The leading point behind the fic was that they were rapidly running out of time and didn't particularly care; they were twenty-nine seconds from dying at the end.

And really, what better way to go out than in a burst of sexual passion?
schedule April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I see, it makes quite a bit more sense now.
And yes, what a way to go, though I always wanted to go out being crushed under a mountain of furbies.
schedule April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, well I havn't played a megaman since the series came out, so, don't know what's going on.
It was well written enough for smut, about all I can say.
7/10
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Semper phi, carry on.