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June 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story so far! Please write more!
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October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think this just turned into a mutant offspring of PWP [Porn Without Plot, AKA 'Plot? What Plot?'] & Fluff.
This a good and highly amusing thing. XD
Mixing up the lyrics makes me sad, but it's AkuRoku, which makes up for the sadness.
Other than getting yourself a proofreader or beta(reader), I think you're good and solid right now. I'll have to follow this, seeing as the song is fun, and this seems to be too adorable to pass by. Keep up with it, and I hope to see more from you in the future.
This a good and highly amusing thing. XD
Mixing up the lyrics makes me sad, but it's AkuRoku, which makes up for the sadness.
Other than getting yourself a proofreader or beta(reader), I think you're good and solid right now. I'll have to follow this, seeing as the song is fun, and this seems to be too adorable to pass by. Keep up with it, and I hope to see more from you in the future.
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October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*drools* SO hot. +_+ <3
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October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my, what an aluring chapter!!!
a few spelling errors here and there, but that doesn't matter...you really wrote axel and roxas' personality perfect.
and the flirting!? hot I tell you
I'm looking forward to the next chapter
Ibe
a few spelling errors here and there, but that doesn't matter...you really wrote axel and roxas' personality perfect.
and the flirting!? hot I tell you
I'm looking forward to the next chapter
Ibe
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September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oiooh
intense!!
mre please.
intense!!
mre please.