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for Curiosity killed Nero

by Silvara

person Opacus
schedule May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Best. Blackmail. Ever.
person Python
schedule December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very hot, i loved it. hope to read more from you. keep up the awsome work!
person Anon
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was decidedly very hot. <3
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHAHA!!! OK that was hot and really funny at the end but there were so many words that were in the wrong place. Made it kinda hard to read but hot none the less =D
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Never rains but pours, does it? All these Vergil/Dante/Nero threesomes suddenly popping up just make me happy and this one is the best of the batch so far. A few tense errors and the like, but nothing huge. The writing itself is quite good. Only thing that bugged me is that Dante obviously had to move from having his face in the mattress to be able to suck Nero off, but you don't mention him doing so. Seriously though, I think I'll be rereading this one for a while :D
person SaintD
schedule September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very hot <3 That last line made me giggle XD Great way to wrap things up