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Really looking forward to the next part. Though, you may want to consider, is Tali's right arm cybernetic? Also, I sawe you've got one section set to be about Emily Wong/Renegade Shepard, but Paragon Shepard's offer of a more "in depth exclusive interview" seems a better window.

Awesome work.

I'm digging this Parasini idea. I just hope you don't make Shepard some renegade asshole for this story. There aren't any stories where the guy just relaxes and gets a blowjob, it's always some guy who grabs the woman's head, rapes her mouth, and cums on her face, lame. Or its a story where he's brought to the edge and instead of cumming in her mouth, he fucks her or she beats him off or she uses her tits, super-lame. I just want a story where Shepard (neutral) just relaxes and gets head from Gianna, cums in her mouth, and then they part ways; no sex, for some reason it takes something out of the experience. This should be more of a business transaction than anything else.

Must...have...more!

Finaly someones has decided to do a shepherd/tali and even better its gonna be a lemon fucking awesome

Two tounges... yum-yum. I can't wait for the next chapter and the Parasini story.

Great fic, I hope you get the reviews you need to motivate you to write more. You know what I'd love to see, Shepard/Parasini, where Gianna Parasini has to blow Shepard to get him to help her with Lorik Qui'in. Keep 'em coming.

Quite an enjoyable story, nice work. Only a couple things I would have liked: gone further with the head-tendril stuff, and kept up the whole blending thing, would have been... interesting if they had still had that really deep connection during the actual sex. Good work though, very nice. I'm looking forward to the others, especially the Tali one.

You've done a great job on first chapter, Enigma.
I'am really looking forward to the "Paying A Debt of Gratitude"-chapter, since it's probably the ONLY fic around here which features a Tali/Shepard-relationship and I like that couple.

Really good.