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December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fuck you on the ending! Good work btw, but fuck that ending! I'll wait 4 u till the next chapter.
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December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HOT!!!
That was clever of you to put them in the decontamination chamber, of course this completely ignores the fact that any exchange of bodily fluid is an exchange of microbes as well.
"It's Just Business", I like the description and eagerly await the posting of of the story.
That was clever of you to put them in the decontamination chamber, of course this completely ignores the fact that any exchange of bodily fluid is an exchange of microbes as well.
"It's Just Business", I like the description and eagerly await the posting of of the story.
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December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story, dude! You HAVE to keep writing them! You are one bad-ass son of a bitch, and I hope you have a very happy christmas/hannuka/kwanzaa!
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November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great stories. They're well written out and provide a vivid picture of what your trying to get across. Just one thing how about FemaleSheperd/Ashley/Liara. Its one of the things they should of added into the game but didn't i mean Jade Empire had the two girls one guy. (but no three girls), Why couldn't mass effect have the two girls one guy or three girls. So just once i'd like to see this kinda thing from mass effect (because i haven't read a story with it yet.)
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November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dude, that's some pretty funny shit in your a/n's. I assume from the happier tone you've procured gainful employment? Keep 'em comin', and I'll keep reviewin' 'em.
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November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I laughed during most of this. Funny read. It was a really good laugh, especially this: "By human sizing, she was a large D-cup, possibly even a lower-number DD." XD I mean, we all know the number stays the same, but the cups get bigger when you try to highlight how big boobs are! Though the image of Tali with DD cups is very amusing, considering her back would be broken from it!
A lot of the writing came off as a really good parody of how stereotypical human/alien sexual encounters play out, simply hilarious! Hey, smut isn't known to be very realistic, I know, but some of the lines that Shepard and Tali spoke to each other were more stilted than being caught by your mother-in-law ready to peg your boyfriend. Especially when he gave her instructions on how to suck -- it sounded like someone had tried to turn my IKEA manual into a sexual experience.
Also, using the term "one-eyed monster" as a way to refer the penis, is such a classic. It never grows old.
All in all, awesome parody!
(No really, I did laugh a lot!)
A lot of the writing came off as a really good parody of how stereotypical human/alien sexual encounters play out, simply hilarious! Hey, smut isn't known to be very realistic, I know, but some of the lines that Shepard and Tali spoke to each other were more stilted than being caught by your mother-in-law ready to peg your boyfriend. Especially when he gave her instructions on how to suck -- it sounded like someone had tried to turn my IKEA manual into a sexual experience.
Also, using the term "one-eyed monster" as a way to refer the penis, is such a classic. It never grows old.
All in all, awesome parody!
(No really, I did laugh a lot!)
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November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yea! love the way your going with it more Tali please.
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November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry to hear that. I hope you can find a job. Great story by the way. I enjoy your characterization.
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November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Looking good, looking forward to update.
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November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love both parts that are currently up. If reviews are what you need to continue this, then I'll gladly oblige.
Personally, my tastes would lean a bit more towards the..."exotic", but that's me and I can't fault your stories since they are yours, and not mine :P.
Both chapters are very well written, always a pleasure to read after sifting through some of the stuff you can find floating around :D.
I liked the first chapter with Liara, but I'm looking forward to Tali a smidgen more.
Keep up the good work and I definitely recommend this set of of stories to whomever may ready this.
Personally, my tastes would lean a bit more towards the..."exotic", but that's me and I can't fault your stories since they are yours, and not mine :P.
Both chapters are very well written, always a pleasure to read after sifting through some of the stuff you can find floating around :D.
I liked the first chapter with Liara, but I'm looking forward to Tali a smidgen more.
Keep up the good work and I definitely recommend this set of of stories to whomever may ready this.