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April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
how about one where Joker listens to Shepard's exploits? :)
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March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The thing about some of us wanting girl on girl action is that we want girl on girl action. So telling us about a chapter with girl on guy on girl action doesn't mean anything to us :(
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March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah. This rocks.
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March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just looking back over this, E, and I am again struck by the quality of the writing as opposed to some of the total crap on this website. I look forward to your next chapter, but you can't rush genius.;) Keep up the good work and I'll keep reviewing it.
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March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This.
FUCKING THIS!
This is gloriously awesome. I see Tali in a whole new light, and the chapter with Liara (though much shorter than Tali's) was equally as awesome.
You are a gentleman and a scholar. Keep it up!
FUCKING THIS!
This is gloriously awesome. I see Tali in a whole new light, and the chapter with Liara (though much shorter than Tali's) was equally as awesome.
You are a gentleman and a scholar. Keep it up!
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March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I would like to say that you write some of the best scenes ever. I find it hard to compare your work to others as yours is so astoundingly good. Keep up the good work! We're all eagerly awaiting your next release!
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March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well I just found this and I have to admit it's a really great story so far. I like your style of writing and how well the scenes are handled as well. You know I always did wonder what that one woman looked like under all that survival gear and your take was a pretty good one. So we'll see a lesbian scene with the two of them huh, that could be interesting and will Shepard be put into the mix for a three way action after it? Will we see Ashley later on, maybe a little thing with the alien women could help her get over her xenophobia and see there is a good thing having some aliens on board.
At any rate keep it up and I'll be checking back now and then to see when you update this story.
At any rate keep it up and I'll be checking back now and then to see when you update this story.
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February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
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February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You've got talent, but this wasn't really what I expected after reading some of the glowing reviews. I don't see the personalities from the game in the story overmuch and it does have the 70's flavor making it feel like a parody (someone else mentioned this, and I have to agree). In fact from the Tali story, I took away from it that it was Renegade Shepard, not Paragon until I read the notes. Just a suggestion-- overusing 'cock' and 'pussy' ceases to be sexy after awhile and becomes silly. It's like a physical version of "oh bob" "oh marsha" back and forth every line. Had me rolling after awhile, imagining a chicken exploding from Shepard's crotch and slamming into some poor dazed cat.
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February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Part 3 was awsome. Can't wait for the next story.