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November 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great mini fic maybe you should do a complete story with shep and tali fthats my favoriite so fare
because there is so lil known about the quariens you could intruduce a bonding mark it would be interestin story
because there is so lil known about the quariens you could intruduce a bonding mark it would be interestin story
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November 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I heard a rumor that you can have a sexual relationship with a quarian (i.e. Tali) in Mass Effect 2. Maybe you have some fans from BioWare.
Where is the update?
Where is the update?
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August 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's been nearly a year since I suggested the Gianna/Parasini story, where the hell is it? The Paragon version just doesn't cut it for me. You are still alive right? You didn't die since your last update did you?
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June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My normal "keep up the good work," review doesn't quite work out so well here. Sorry to here about the job, go go economy, but... you know... keep up the good work...
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June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved "Just Business". You're improving with every chapter! Any chance Shepard will 'negotiate' with Emily Wong or Nassana Dantius? I'd also love to see Shiala offer some form of 'compensation' after she and the Thorian are dealt with.
Whatever the future brings, I'm looking forward to more of this story!
Whatever the future brings, I'm looking forward to more of this story!
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June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dear god that thing with Tali might be the most enjoyable thing I've read on here. I get a real kick out of the xeno stuff. Your plate seems rather full but here are some things I'd like to see: Shepard and a salarian female, Shepard and a krogan female, handjobs from a hanar
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May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Exquisite! I mean, not too smutty [i.e. bad porn in writing, which make up 49.5% of the materials here] and not too gooey/emo-ey [i.e. the other 49.5%]. The balance of smut and story and comedy is just perfect. Plus, there's none of those 12-inch dicks running around. I don't understand our gender's obsession with imagining girls being plundered by these monstrosities, when most of us are averagely endowed.
Might I be so bold to request a straight devil's threesome with Kaidan? Consider it a challenge because a straight MMF is almost always pure smut with bad writing. I see an abundance of Wrex smut here and I'm like wtf! Wrex is not a tasteful sexual being!
And I read that somebody dissed you for having the name Elegy? Dude, that's a cool name. I mean, it's not as hippie as Moonbeam or Sycamore and not as common as John, Paul or George. [I'm tempted to add 'and Ringo!' =P]
Might I be so bold to request a straight devil's threesome with Kaidan? Consider it a challenge because a straight MMF is almost always pure smut with bad writing. I see an abundance of Wrex smut here and I'm like wtf! Wrex is not a tasteful sexual being!
And I read that somebody dissed you for having the name Elegy? Dude, that's a cool name. I mean, it's not as hippie as Moonbeam or Sycamore and not as common as John, Paul or George. [I'm tempted to add 'and Ringo!' =P]
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May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh and I actually agree with SonoftheAtomicBiscuithead last point. Saying cock and pussy all the time is rather droll. I mean, there's literally dozens of different words for both and repeating the same thing over and over again is boring to read. On the other hand, you don't want to overdo it. My personal reading preference is when the writer sticks with 2, maximum 3, synonyms.
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May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love your stories, all of them. You do a great job bringing the characters to life.
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April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely LOVE this. I've loved it since Part 1, and I love the other stories/story ideas that are being put up here. Keep up the excellent fapfiction :D