rate_review Reviews

Really liking this story. Good job.

Alive?

Don't worry, I'm no mere reviewer. As much as i love the story (Yes people, i, a man of class, love it... or is it the dirty talk? Probably that) i wish for it to be continued, that is per say that you are continuing it in any way at all.

I wish to lend my assistance to you. I've done rather well on my own fics on Fanfiction.net, so i can spare some time and aid.

Do tell me you're alive. I wish for this to resume, with or without my assistance.

this may be one of the longest smut pieces ive read but not once does the flow of the story slow down and its always pretty fucking hot. my fav was tali because i felt you managed to do the story while remaining true to the characters and not just over sexualizing them, it also helps it was an amazing bit of smutt. please continue the "debt of gratitude" series im waiting with baited breath

If you still need ideas for new pairings, perhaps Shepard/Chakwasa would be a good place to start. She always seemed to show off a sensual, mature aura.

Also, perhaps consider making an encounter with a female Shepard. Not saying you should, just it's something to consider.

great job!
one pairing i would like to see would be Fem!Shepard/Miranda from ME2

Enigma, I love you (no homo). This story is incredible. Erotic, descriptive and interesting, I was completely captivated by your words. Your vision of Tali is beautiful, and I will see her in with your design in mind every time I play the game. Proud owner of a PS3, I am forced to play the game for my PC (not a cruel fate, I assure you). I just recently started up the game, as a fan of Bioware's RPGs and was entranced. Your stories however, will make the game that much more entertaining for me.

You're an excellent writer, and I look forward to more stories from you! I took the liberty of bookmarking your page, I'll know when you update.

Thank you for the story, and thank you for sharing it with all of us!

Thanks very much for putting so much obvious time and effort into these stories, the way you meld the fantastic elements of Mass Effect and the reality of sex and make them work is amazing, and not to put too fine a point on it, fucking HOT. Easily the best story in the section, and for me at least up there with the best in the whole site. Keep up the good work.

It's confirmed, you get to fuck Tali in Mass Effect 2! Now where are the fucking updates?

I will point out that Tali has three toes and not two, a minor thing. I enjoyed your fic immensely.

Amusing series of situations so far. A few times in your paragon Gianna Parasini encounter you have Shepard referred to as "Enigma," even after you state in the introductory AN that your Shepard's name is Elegy. Dunno if that happens in any other chapters. Not really a big deal, but since you brought it up first...