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I'm really looking forward to the next chapters as well! You always leave me wanting more. Also, I was secretly hoping you'd write a masturbation scene, the toys you mentioned a couple times in previous chapters piqued my interest. Ah, now I'll have to draw it.

When I was drawing the last picture, I kind of had chapter one in mind when Vox was first trying to persuade Albel. I got kind of frustrated so I drew the small Albel just to do something silly, but it can be him making the pro/con list too :P

Oh, and I will keep an eye out for your e-mail :)

Oh, I loved this chapter very much! I really like how Albel has changed through the story's progression, and the stages of his relationship with Vox, it makes the time-line feel much more real. And I honestly cannot think of anything that needs any special attention, you're doing a really great job with this. Ah, I would be so sad if you stopped writing D:

Mm, I have MSN (manaisms@yahoo.com) and AIM (manaisms), if you wanna contact me :) I can't say that I role-play often, I don't consider myself very good at it so I don't have a lot of confidence with it. Most of the role-playing I did was in WoW, before role-play completely died on my server :x

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y282/Oishii12345/voarufailz.png I apologize that's all I have for you (and that it's so boring)

I actually wasn't expecting Vox to allow Albel to have his concubine, but I do like the issues she has brought up. I'm really excited to see where you go with it. Jealous Vox makes me giddy inside.

Ah, normally I don't review stories, even ones I like; I just add them to my favorites and quietly lurk. But Vox/Albel is such a rare pairing, and you write it so well too, that I really wanted to show my support. I hope you enjoy writing it as much as I enjoy reading it :)

I feel a little guilty that I have no new art for you, but I'm working on it T-T *crumbles up paper and starts over for the billionth time*

A treat indeed :) ilu *hearts*

Ah, I'm very glad you liked the pictures, and I'd be happy to draw more. I feel much more confident posting knowing you like them. And as much as I'd love to see you post another chapter so soon, I'm afraid I don't have anything prepared as a bribe, hehe :P I've got some ideas in my head though, so I'll try to draw more and get some stuff up when I can.

*waits patiently for updates*

I like how you told more of Vox's side of things with this chapter :3

If I try to think of what Vox and Albel would be like in a romantic relationship seriously, while keeping truest to their characters, I think how you write them in this story describes it best. Vox would be very controlling and possessive of Albel, a man who lives by his own rules and is far too reblious for Vox to fully master. But that makes it all the more fun, in my opinion. Really, I can spend a lot of time talking about my favorite pairings, but that would quickly turn into TL;DR.

Ah, I do have some arts for you...
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y282/Oishii12345/voarusm.png
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y282/Oishii12345/va002unfin.png

Neither are finished but I didn't really feel either of them were worth finishing, but at least it's something... I guess :x

Another sexy chapter~ Albel's gotta be a bitch to write, but you do it well :)

Hmm, I have probably reread chapter two the most, it's the closest to my favorite, but I really like chapter one too. Mostly because the relationship is still establishing, and I'm also a big pervert and those are my favorite sex scenes :P But I really like seven too, because it's fun watching Albel wrestle with his conflicting emotions.

And I do have a DA account, but I hardly ever post there because I lack the confidence to put up stuff publicly. Especially when it comes to the more porny drawings, which is basically what all the Vox/Albel ones are :x If I do end up posting them it'd probably be on my LJ... I'll try to get a few cleaned up and presentable and see T-T *no confidence*

Ah, another chapter <3 It always picks my night up when I check the site before heading to bed and see this has updated.

You raised a couple questions with this chapter I look forward to seeing answered. How Albel will handle his new realizations is at the top, of course, Vox's reason for not taking the throne, his hatred for Aquaria... Just gets me wondering :)

Hmm, I can't write to save my life but I do draw a little bit. Of course your story has sparked a few Vox/Albel doodles here and there, but they're really nothing amazing.

Gah, it cut off my review D: Sorry! Apparently typing a heart cuts off everything after the heart. Doh.

But, as I was saying, it always picks my night up when I come to check the site before heading to bed and I see that this has been updated.

You raised a couple questions with this chapter that I really look forward to seeing answered. How Albel will handle his new revelations is at the top, of course, Vox's reason for not taking the throne, his hatred for Aquaria... Just gets me wondering :)

Hmm, I can't write to save my life but I do draw a little bit. Of course your story has sparked a few Vox/Albel doodles here and there, but they're really nothing special.

Ah, sorry again for the mess up x(

Each chapter has been wonderful so choosing just one favorite scene is a bit tough, but I gotta say I have a particular fondness for the latest chapters. The marriage idea was really out there, but you've made it work with how well you write Vox and Albel interacting together despite the somewhat unusual situation, while still keeping them in character.

I really can't express enough how much I love you for keeping this fic going, and you always manage to sneak a little bit of sex into each chapter :P Really, I just can't wait to see what you have planned yourself. The pairing may be complete crack, but I can't get enough of it anyway.

I'm definitely interested to see what you have planned :) Looking forward very much to the next update.

Ah, if you compare, a lot of the official artwork doesn't quite match the final models used in game (mostly eye colors), so maybe Vox's age/hair/whatever was just one of those things changed. Personally, I like to think of the in-game models as the most correct, but that's just me :x