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December 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I literally just stayed up all night reading this through. That was depressing...even though Albel didn't tear up, I did. :( Vox was getting so endearing at the end, too. Even so, a great read! Too bad Cliff couldn't cure 'Bel of his depression with steamy sex, but you have other lovely fics for that! Cheers!
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August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I must say, this story really got me into the Vox/Albel pairing. Your characterizations of Albel and Vox are excellent and I just love the plot you came up with. I really enjoy rereading this fanfic over and over again. :)
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June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
:( I didn't want it to be over.
Yeah, my exams are done now, but thank you all the same ^^ And I will post that fic... Eventually. I'm working now so time's still fairly short, but I'll try, I really will.
Gah, sad chapter was sad. Poor Albel... Life really hates him. :(
Yeah, my exams are done now, but thank you all the same ^^ And I will post that fic... Eventually. I'm working now so time's still fairly short, but I'll try, I really will.
Gah, sad chapter was sad. Poor Albel... Life really hates him. :(
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June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I read it all in one sitting *is proud*
I know how you feel of getting sick of looking at a chapter. It's happened to me before. And you've got every right to keep us waiting: Uni > fic. As much as it pains me to say it XD I've got exams coming up, too. Congrats on your paper, by the way ^^
Eh, sorry if pointing out grammar bugs you. Everyone makes mistakes, so I thought it might help. My best friend always points out the typos etc. in my fics... And yours is very well written, so there's never anything else to point out XD
Lessee... There was a line I liked, but I forgot to copy it and don't want to have to go through all the rigamarole of copying and pasting what I've already written here... But when Albel's in the dungeon and thinks "just fine, except for being locked in his own country's dngeons and accused of treason" (Or however it went), that made me laugh out loud. It's so Albel. It seems he rejects everything good.
Kudos to you on such a long (and awesome) chapter. I'll see about posting up that NC Vox/Albel, and maybe even write a con one... But, you know, exams... They eat me ><
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I know how you feel of getting sick of looking at a chapter. It's happened to me before. And you've got every right to keep us waiting: Uni > fic. As much as it pains me to say it XD I've got exams coming up, too. Congrats on your paper, by the way ^^
Eh, sorry if pointing out grammar bugs you. Everyone makes mistakes, so I thought it might help. My best friend always points out the typos etc. in my fics... And yours is very well written, so there's never anything else to point out XD
Lessee... There was a line I liked, but I forgot to copy it and don't want to have to go through all the rigamarole of copying and pasting what I've already written here... But when Albel's in the dungeon and thinks "just fine, except for being locked in his own country's dngeons and accused of treason" (Or however it went), that made me laugh out loud. It's so Albel. It seems he rejects everything good.
Kudos to you on such a long (and awesome) chapter. I'll see about posting up that NC Vox/Albel, and maybe even write a con one... But, you know, exams... They eat me ><
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March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay new chapter! :D:D:D You just made my day. That is one of the hottest sex scenes I have ever read. Ever. Period.
Ahahaha, maybe when coursework isn't eating my life I will write something ;) I've got lots of Chemistry and Physics reports to write up and such... Suffice to say I share a little of your work-related pain, although since I'm only in Y13 my coursework isn't ^quite^ as long. Well, the Chemistry is. But the Physics isn't.
GAH, WHY DOES WORK EAT MY LIFE?
Oooh, a long chapter to come? I love long chapters! Long chapters make me happy ^^
I must confess I've never heard the term "snowed" before. You learn something new every day!
Now to rain on your parade and point out two grammar issues, XD *engages Grammar Nazi Mode*
[“Of course not, you’re father was almost as mad...] your, since it needs the possesive.
[ Retirement had to have it's benefits ] its, since it's is for "it is."
But don't think they detract any from the story ^^ I like to get constructive criticism when I write, sooo...
(I might possibly have written a non-con Albel/Vox fic, maybeperhaps. But I'll do a con one just for you, since this story has 100% converted me to Albel/Vox)
Ahahaha, maybe when coursework isn't eating my life I will write something ;) I've got lots of Chemistry and Physics reports to write up and such... Suffice to say I share a little of your work-related pain, although since I'm only in Y13 my coursework isn't ^quite^ as long. Well, the Chemistry is. But the Physics isn't.
GAH, WHY DOES WORK EAT MY LIFE?
Oooh, a long chapter to come? I love long chapters! Long chapters make me happy ^^
I must confess I've never heard the term "snowed" before. You learn something new every day!
Now to rain on your parade and point out two grammar issues, XD *engages Grammar Nazi Mode*
[“Of course not, you’re father was almost as mad...] your, since it needs the possesive.
[ Retirement had to have it's benefits ] its, since it's is for "it is."
But don't think they detract any from the story ^^ I like to get constructive criticism when I write, sooo...
(I might possibly have written a non-con Albel/Vox fic, maybeperhaps. But I'll do a con one just for you, since this story has 100% converted me to Albel/Vox)
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March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Vox's delusions of a domesticated Albel makes me giggle... Keep dreaming, Vox. They seem to be in a cozy place in their relationship again though, which is nice to read. Like you said, most fics with any mention of Vox/Albel usually hint at rape. Which is all fine and dandy but can get old after a while. It's true that they will never be the picture of a perfect, happy couple, but that's what keeps them interesting.
It was nice seeing Albel take more control in sex too, Vox didn't seem to mind either. And blowjobs are always a win. Maybe Vox will learn now that there are more fun things to sex than just 'bend over, insert here'.
Your chapters are always worth the wait, so don't worry about taking a long time to update. School and real life are still more important than porn (sadly).
It was nice seeing Albel take more control in sex too, Vox didn't seem to mind either. And blowjobs are always a win. Maybe Vox will learn now that there are more fun things to sex than just 'bend over, insert here'.
Your chapters are always worth the wait, so don't worry about taking a long time to update. School and real life are still more important than porn (sadly).
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March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Panty Thief Vox. Fuck yeah x3
And Demetrio was a nice little cameo.
Now that Vox and Albel are on better terms I am interested to see what will cause everything to fall apart again. You keep promising an epic ending, you tease.
My comment is short and lame :(
And Demetrio was a nice little cameo.
Now that Vox and Albel are on better terms I am interested to see what will cause everything to fall apart again. You keep promising an epic ending, you tease.
My comment is short and lame :(
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February 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can cover two years in three word!
*Two years later*
I'm a genius ^^
...Wow, just wow. That chapter was amazing. ^Just^ what I needed to cheer me up ^^ God, I do love Albel though. And seeing him take control from those arrogant men (Demetrio is one boss I am more than happy to dispose of!) was just AWESOME. They didn't get their map back for a while, did they? :D
To sum up, six words...
Albel. And. Vox. Are. Hot. Together. ^^ ^^
Awaiting the next chapter ^very^ eagerly!
*Two years later*
I'm a genius ^^
...Wow, just wow. That chapter was amazing. ^Just^ what I needed to cheer me up ^^ God, I do love Albel though. And seeing him take control from those arrogant men (Demetrio is one boss I am more than happy to dispose of!) was just AWESOME. They didn't get their map back for a while, did they? :D
To sum up, six words...
Albel. And. Vox. Are. Hot. Together. ^^ ^^
Awaiting the next chapter ^very^ eagerly!
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February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
O-only four more chapters? I'm not sure which I want more... For the story to go on or to know what happens...
Don't knock plot! Plot is the best thing EVAR. If you'll excuse my intentional misspelling >< It was good to learn a bit more of what Albel thinks about the whole situation, I can see why he would think things liket hat about Vox...
Their relationship is definitely a ^lot^ more like it is during the game's timeline now. And I applaud the way you've managed to keep them in character the entire time - if I ever write a long story, occasinally characterisation tends to slip...
Keep it up! ¢¾
Don't knock plot! Plot is the best thing EVAR. If you'll excuse my intentional misspelling >< It was good to learn a bit more of what Albel thinks about the whole situation, I can see why he would think things liket hat about Vox...
Their relationship is definitely a ^lot^ more like it is during the game's timeline now. And I applaud the way you've managed to keep them in character the entire time - if I ever write a long story, occasinally characterisation tends to slip...
Keep it up! ¢¾
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January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay for plot :D
Vox's suspicious mind jumps to conclusions I see XD Poor Albel's going to get quite the shock... I'm sure he'll have fun with that ^^
And ouch, replacement limb. I couldn't help but think of the pain it must cause to attach nerves to technology... And typical Albel is ungrateful XD
Lovely chapter as ever ^^
Vox's suspicious mind jumps to conclusions I see XD Poor Albel's going to get quite the shock... I'm sure he'll have fun with that ^^
And ouch, replacement limb. I couldn't help but think of the pain it must cause to attach nerves to technology... And typical Albel is ungrateful XD
Lovely chapter as ever ^^