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for House Dorthonion

by ancipitalme

schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow! you can really tell that a lot of thought went into all the little details in this story. there's a lot of neat "backstory" things that really flesh it out very well. heh, truthfully I find the characters shown so far (and I know I'm going to slaughter the spelling), Taish, his twin, and Kiril, to be a little... well, heh, honestly I think they're pretty girly and effeminate and I like to read about, heh, "manlier" men, but that's just a matter of personal taste lol! can't please everyone either, right? anyways, I felt like I had to say that I really dug all the thought you put into all your backstory, it really shows through (and kiril's history with the druid sounds even more interesting than the twin's story O.o).