AFF Fiction Portal
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
dude just

what

man though I've got to admit it was well-written, yeah. just. whaaaaat.

I laughed my ass off at Shion's dialogue in this, HOW IS THIS SO STRANGELY IN-CHARACTER DESPITE ALL THE SHIT THAT'S GOING ON WTF. totally heard Margulis bitching at Jin, too, rofl. and Pellegri calling him a faggot = A++ would lol again

just dude what. WHAT.

why am I impressed by this 8[

good show, sir, you glorious sick fuck
person Xel
schedule June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You know, this is in no way my bag, particularly, but I felt compelled to drop a review based purely on the fact that it's, well... it's very, very well-written. Numerous times I could only laugh uproariously at your word choice, which is positively stunning. They are powerful weapons in your hands, friend. Positively epic.
person Anonymous
schedule October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was mind-numbingly fucked up. I actually feel a bit scandalized, and I'm a veteran of the 'chans.

Do write another one.
person Darkon
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha yeah some things were just meant to be ruined, not that that's a bad thing. Howard Stern ruined radio. Rotten.com ruined the internet. George Clooney ruined Batman...wait...scratch that one off...

Anyways, if you keep writing, I'll keep reading.
person Darkon
schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is quite possibly the trashiest story I've ever read so far...SHEER BRILLIANCE! This needs to be more than just a one-shot, I think...
schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks. I felt like destroying something beautiful.

- FS