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for Playing maid

by Silvara

schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hehe i saw the pic its cute!! xDD
person Batman
schedule September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hehe I liked that. I think Dante really could persuade Nero to do anything XD Will you continue? I'll come and check for updates anyway ;) There's not enough Dante/Nero love around
schedule September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was hot. =D claps* Can you draw? cause if you can I think you should draw a picture of Nero in said maid outfit! That would rock my lame ass socks ~_^
person Ultima
schedule September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's a cute story, but I find Nero to be somewhat out of character. I mean, I don't think he'd ever resort to prostitution, no matter what. Even if it meant moving far away from Fortuna and always keeping his arm in a sling, it's in his blood to hunt devils and I'm just not sure that he'd ever give that up.

You did pretty good considering that English isn't your native language, although I would suggest finding a native speaker who can be your beta. Otherwise, you've done well.


- Jen
person Lorena
schedule September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story, so much funny...!! I really love the comedy, lol... and it's so funny to see Nero in thah... position, LOL!!