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for Empty Beauty Plot

by SilentNinja

schedule September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm.

I liked the general idea. I was expecting AU but it turns out to be accountable to canon. The execution was not that good, however--too many mistyped words for my liking (eg "I haven't proposal her yet"). But I appreciate the effort. Do better next time. From a fellow Zhen Ji fan.