rate_review Reviews

Despite not being a hardcore fan of twincest or incest in general, this story was pretty well written, however you should consider taking on a beta, for minor things such as spelling and grammar. No matter what anyone says, those two things actually make or break a story for a lot of people, and I felt myself stumbling a little while reading it. Keep working hard!

This was good, a bit rushed but good, I'd actually like to see what happens w the brothers. If Roxas can keep clean and if Sora stops cutting for good or if something else makes him start back up, and if they're found out and by who and what happens. Axel was supposed to come over >_>

Great story but so angsty... So much pain and so many misunderstandings. The smexx at the end was really hot though!